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Nature's Poetic Voice.

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "In a Red Cascade."
A sensory appreciation of nature.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Shirley

= Nice imagery of nature.
= Love the beautiful tree and its color.
= Hope all is well at your end. (*<*)

*Cheers & Blessings...*
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
    Thanks Jax.
    Yes, I'm feeling much better now.
    Just enjoying my family, life and nature.
    Still behind with reviews but slowly catching up.
    :-)
Comment from l.raven
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Oh Shirley, this is just beautiful...and I love the wording...the leaves now gone...and the blossoms are feed natures birds...and soon rest for the season...beautiful...I love your poem sweet girl...and the picture you took ...stunning...soooooo very well written...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
    Thanks Linda.
    Your review makes my heart sing.
    Nature just seems to call to me and I have always found a fascination
    with all it has to offer.
    Still playing catch up with reviews.
    :-)
reply by l.raven on 10-Jan-2016
    not to worry Shirley...I get behind myself...you take care...and you are so welcome....xxoo Linda
Comment from Treischel
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The photograph is lovely. The words are sublime. Your aabb rhymed quatrains shine, as I follow every line. You can almost smell the perfume. Sweet metaphor in that Scarlett cloak. Wonderful imagery, like: red cascade, resplendent stance, feast at leisure. Strong emotion too.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
    Thanks so much. I'm smiling with happiness.
    I had a run-in with writer's block after the events of last year and have been off-site a lot.
    I'm hoping this year is my year is my year to achieve a writing milestone.
    Fingers crossed,
    :-) Shirley
Comment from melyuki
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Hi Shirley, from one nature lover to another, splendid..... love the picture you paint with words and the image to match. Love these trees. and your verse most certainly does them justice .. thanks for lovely journey. have a peaceful evening and a great weekend, smiles from mel xxx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
    Thanks Mel.
    I appreciate your review.
    Nature truly is amazing.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from a.w.brooks
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Loved it I like the meter and the rhythm the words flow very well with each other the also had a good beat. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the read and Happy Writing.

A.W.Brooks

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
    Thanks so much for your review.
    I truly appreciate it.
    :-) Shirley
reply by a.w.brooks on 09-Jan-2016
    You're Welcome