Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

LOL I enjoyed your poem. Good job with the format. Your syllable count is good. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review janny. It was fun to write, cheers j..

Comment from takikoazn

Excellent

I liked the play on words and love the picture. It was a great choice for this poem. You followed the prompt instructions. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review cheers j

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Great play on words. Very funny and even thought provoking as one had to look twice. This is a great idea for this contest-Good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers j

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

this was a superb little play o n words in this clever 5-7-5 piece. It should do well in this competition I should have thought.

very funny and smart.
GMG

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, I appreciate your thoughts on this one, cheers

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Lol, good job. had a laugh on this one fits the prompt very well. good luck in the contest with this. have a safe and happy new year.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review and wishing you all the best in the new year too, cheers