Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

Very good trinet. I admire your faith in the Lord. I enjoy the setting out here.
There is lot of good advice. Complaining should be restricted to only things which matter.
Good work.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings my friend...........................Portia

Comment from amahra

Excellent

This is a beautiful art work that you chose for your writing. I also loved the purple background color and off white font. The poem was well written and beautifully show cased in its centered style. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings my friend...............................Portia

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

three very good things to start the new year...look to your future, be grateful for all you have...trust in God...pray to Him...so very nicely written...and I love your picture and the colors...

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......................Portia

reply by l.raven on 08-Jan-2016

you are so welcome Portia...and blessings to you as well...luff Linda

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This trinet poem, Brighter Days Ahead, lays out a few positive steps that folks can take in 2016 and beyond to give their lives more zest and meaning.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your very kind review. Blessings...........................Portia

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I love your inspiring well written poem and enjoyed reading it. It flows well with positive direction. Your artwork choice is perfect. Good luck in the contest.

Angel123

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.........................Portia

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

These are all great ideas for brighter days and living a better life. I think we all strive to do these things but sadly it's easier said than done. I try to trust God more but then I find myself doing my old ways. It's a hard habit to break

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I believe most strive to do the right things and yes it is easier said than done. We must continue to strive to do that which is right and your days as well as my days will be brighter. Blessings my friend..................lol.....Portia

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

Very well written trinet and a very good message for new year. Only concern is I think syllable count is not matching with the rules in some of the lines. Otherwise I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. For this particular contest it was based on the number of words per line rather than syllable count. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings my friend.....................Portia

reply by Sambangi on 07-Jan-2016

Thank you for the clarification

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Nothing personal but is this sort of thing really poetry?

Get in
Cockpit drill
Turn the key to start engine
Engage gear set gas find bite
check mirror
handbrake off
drive on

What next for heavens sake? I mean it's hardly challenging is it?

Read poem
check rules
write a few sentences in review
decide on the number of stars
click that
check account
next poem

Oh my isn't this form versatile you can run your whole life in trinets.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and your take on this particular contest, you had a very good entry my friend. I appreciate your review. Blessings.......................Portia

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Good advice for everyone compacted in this Trinet. Learn from yesterday's mistakes and forget the past. Live for today it might be your last and hope for a better tomorrow.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........................Portia

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very good worked a spiritual poem on this prompt that works out great. Well done. Good luck in the contest with this. hope you enjoyed the holidays

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016

William,
Thanks so much for your support, review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........................Portia