Short Form Poetry
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Comment from I am Cat
Well, I'm sure that with many people upset about this entire situation
there will be many (especially the reactives) they will jump on this band wagon)
I'm not much of a 'beheading' type of person.
And so... I"ll just stick with the poetry.
;)
if that's ok with you.
Great choice of colors for presentation,
red: the color of passion/blood
black: death/ and to show the seriousness of the subject
syllabic count perfect.
good luck with the contest! ;)
Mwah!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
Well, I'm sure that with many people upset about this entire situation
there will be many (especially the reactives) they will jump on this band wagon)
I'm not much of a 'beheading' type of person.
And so... I"ll just stick with the poetry.
;)
if that's ok with you.
Great choice of colors for presentation,
red: the color of passion/blood
black: death/ and to show the seriousness of the subject
syllabic count perfect.
good luck with the contest! ;)
Mwah!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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I'll sit at home and watch. I like to stir 'em up, but I'm entirely too lazy to participate. Besides, I'm a bleeding heart pacifist liberal. :)) A whore when it comes to contests and the common denominator though, so some attributes. Ha! mikey
Comment from Sasha
This is brilliant and I agree completely. Normally nonviolent ISIS has changed my mind completely. Kill them all. Marvelous entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
This is brilliant and I agree completely. Normally nonviolent ISIS has changed my mind completely. Kill them all. Marvelous entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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I'm totally nonviolent as well, but yep, Kill 'em all, then we can march for peace somewhere. :))
Thank you so much. mikey
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I was concerned you may think my reply a bit strong, but I honestly believe the world would be better without these evil people.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, if only....those are some evil people sweetie....short poem with some powerful words you...very well said...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
Hi Michael, if only....those are some evil people sweetie....short poem with some powerful words you...very well said...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much. I thought I'd just take what crosses my mind often concerning these soulless fiends. I'm sure there are saner and kinder responses, but I'd be lying if I didn't acknowledge this feeling. mikey
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you are so very welcome you...xxoo luff
Comment from Neonewman
That is the way I felt with mine as well. I love this controversial little short you have entered. I am sure it will turn a few heads and maybe get a sour look or two, but who freaking cares. It's brilliant!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
That is the way I felt with mine as well. I love this controversial little short you have entered. I am sure it will turn a few heads and maybe get a sour look or two, but who freaking cares. It's brilliant!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Yeah. I even give myself a sour look. Hahaha.
But, hell, if this hasn't crossed someone's mind, they are already in Heaven. :)) mikey
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Lol! Right on!
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Lol! Right on!
Comment from MissMerri
Yes! I'm in complete agreement. But who is going to do it? Thanks for a thought-provoking poem. I needed something to think about before bed tonight. I think this will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
Yes! I'm in complete agreement. But who is going to do it? Thanks for a thought-provoking poem. I needed something to think about before bed tonight. I think this will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much. I sure wish I had some answers. At the moment I'm left to acknowledge what I truly feel. :))
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
Very well said, my poet friend! My opinions on how terrorists should be handled is not exactly 'humane', but I feel that we should have made an example of this group with severe public punishment and let the vultures finish them off. In the old west, they took care of business, I'm just saying. Very bold, strong 2-4-2 poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
Very well said, my poet friend! My opinions on how terrorists should be handled is not exactly 'humane', but I feel that we should have made an example of this group with severe public punishment and let the vultures finish them off. In the old west, they took care of business, I'm just saying. Very bold, strong 2-4-2 poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Hi, my friend. We are on the same page for sure!! I'm ready to saddle up right now!! You state perfectly what I believe is the general mood we're all in. Great response, thank you. mikey
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You might not promote, it, Mikey, but I agree with your words, they are perfect. I will help raise the sword and bring it down on their nasty disgusting heads. Good luck in the contest, my friend! Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
You might not promote, it, Mikey, but I agree with your words, they are perfect. I will help raise the sword and bring it down on their nasty disgusting heads. Good luck in the contest, my friend! Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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I think we are all on the same page with this one. I can have a nice sane and intellectual response, but I think this is the way to go. There's no reasoning. mikey
Comment from misscookie
There is nothing wrong with express how you feel, that what your rights are in the united states of America.
I'm sure other wanted to say the same but held back for their own personal reasons.
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
There is nothing wrong with express how you feel, that what your rights are in the united states of America.
I'm sure other wanted to say the same but held back for their own personal reasons.
Cookie
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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I agree. I'm sure if it came down to it I'd have a more sane resopnse. But, you're so correct, this does occur to many from time to time when confronted with the senselessness of the whole thing. Blessings, mikey
Comment from Rubylou
The sentiment of your 2-4-2 is truly something that is on most people's minds. Your words and presentation certainly strike a chord.
I like the satori as it is left open for thought.
Best to you,
Rubylou
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
The sentiment of your 2-4-2 is truly something that is on most people's minds. Your words and presentation certainly strike a chord.
I like the satori as it is left open for thought.
Best to you,
Rubylou
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Thank you kindly. Yes, I'm not really calling for this, but it DOES occur to me every time I see a video of those animals. Great response. mikey
Comment from Jacob Collins
It's very simple, Isis needs wiping from the face of the Earth, I can't believe it's taken this long for governments to actually to start doings something about the problem. They've left it too late as already they've started spreading around the world. I thought this was a well written piece about this issue, Michael, I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
It's very simple, Isis needs wiping from the face of the Earth, I can't believe it's taken this long for governments to actually to start doings something about the problem. They've left it too late as already they've started spreading around the world. I thought this was a well written piece about this issue, Michael, I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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I so pleased this spoke to you. I agree 100%. What other response can there be. Thanks, mikey