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A Collection Of Short Form Poetry

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Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your interesting, dramatic poem. It flows well and good alliteration of words man's mob. I also like your artwork choice.

Angel123

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed. anon
Comment from mbagby23
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This is a good entry for the contest. I like the layout color choice. And how you put the two pictures with the poem. The good with the bad.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
    Thank you. You've taken it as intended. Great to hear. anon
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

This is a fantastic senryu. A very finely observed commentary on that mentality. Synchronicity is a funny thing. Drives to create chaos or total harmony. Such is the duality of life.

Great piece and good luck
GMG

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
    Man, you have this analyzed exactly as I intended. Couldn't be more pleased. Thanks a lot, anon