Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

So well-written, and I couldn't help but hold my breath, waiting for something, anything, to save her! Apparently nothing. But I am still hoping a miracle may occur in the next chapter. Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020

Thank you. Plenty left to go.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Exceptional

This was superb. I am so glad I have a six left. It was like reading a best seller. You are a very talented writer, and should have this published.

I heard about executions via a lethal injection on electric chair; but never read such a close account of it. It was electrifying. I admit, I was hoping against hope that something would happen at the last minute; that the governor would call giving clemency, anything. The read had a touch of Hitchcock in it, keeping you on the edger of your chair.

Brilliant! I am still shaking. Poor Sarah...

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020

Thank you very much for this show of support. More to come soon.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Here we go again back to the execution section with more details about the fight for freedom apriory and the last moments before the execution. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020

Thank you very much.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Once again Wow. It is a blessing that Sarah doesn't remember the first attempt in the electric chair. Emotions run high in this chapter. Everyone involved is experiencing the event in their own way and for some I am sure it brings back reminders. Great chapter.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Yes, it is tough...even in 20014. Thank you.

reply by aryr on 25-May-2016

Again welcome. I don't think it would be easy in any year, the responsibility of causing a death regardless of why has to weigh on one;s soul.

Comment from Patricia L. Settoon

Excellent

Great Job! Kept me involved throughout the chapter. With no other details to go on, this chapter really keeps the individual reader wondering will they really execute her and what has she done? Writing is neat, clear, and concise! Keep it up!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016

Thank you very much. The crime is described in the prologue. All chapters of this book are posted, if you're interested.

Comment from Sharen12

Excellent

This is a hard area of writing for anyone to do. You did a good job at letting the reader know how the procedure takes place. The prisoner is very scared but quiet. Your book must have other information to lead to this execution that would give the reader more understanding. There were 4 murder accounts so she really was not innocent at all. I firmly agree do unto others what you have done to them.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016

It's far from simple...in this case. All chapters of this book are up, in case you're interested. The prologue contains the crime. Thank you for this positive feedback.

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A very nice poem- to read on a cold snowy day in Virginia. Your words are well chosen. The dialogue worked well. Thanks for sharing--
Bill

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016

Thank you.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I enjoyed the plot and the character development was very nice. I got good visuals from the dialogue. I like this kind of chrime fiction. the stork is easy to follow.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016

Thank you for your time and your review.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

The "legal" system with every single factor is a great topic to write on. It will never cease to be I imagine. I love the way you write. You are one of my faves even if I review or read more than once. Please never ever stop writing, ok...

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016

Thank you. That's very kind of you to say.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I think the spelling for the skull cap is yarmulke.

I like the way you're doing this new version. Even though I've read the first, I'm still nervous. 8-)

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016

Thank you very much.