2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "haiku (last light of day)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
32 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Gypsy,
This is a super haiku and I love the alliteration in the first
line and the imagery in line 2 and unexpected satori..
really nice presentation and a pleasure to stop by and
review.
Happy New Year dear,
Linda
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Gypsy,
This is a super haiku and I love the alliteration in the first
line and the imagery in line 2 and unexpected satori..
really nice presentation and a pleasure to stop by and
review.
Happy New Year dear,
Linda
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you Linda, I appreciate you taking the time to review and read. :) happy new year!
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent imagery with the two sided mirror. Both the sky and the lake reflect each other at twilight. It is such a beautiful and thought provoking time of day. Excellent formatting to enhance your theme.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Excellent imagery with the two sided mirror. Both the sky and the lake reflect each other at twilight. It is such a beautiful and thought provoking time of day. Excellent formatting to enhance your theme.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much Debi, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku. :)
Comment from boxergirl
One of my most favorite times of day when the last light of day slowly fades away. Love the imagery of the two-sided mirror on the cobalt blue lake. Nice alliteration with last light. Good assonance rhyming with day and lake.
Happy New Year!
Karen 8-)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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One of my most favorite times of day when the last light of day slowly fades away. Love the imagery of the two-sided mirror on the cobalt blue lake. Nice alliteration with last light. Good assonance rhyming with day and lake.
Happy New Year!
Karen 8-)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much Karen, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku. Happy New Year!
Gypsy
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
last light of day
reflected on cobalt blue lake
two sided mirror
a clever use of words in this short piece and well
presented, Gypsy.
The torrential rain is pelting on the Velux winder above my head and gale force wind is so loud I can barely think. Thank goodness we're built on higher ground here in the South and the water all runs away. I feel so sorry for those up North who are getting flooded out.
Margaret
Margaret
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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last light of day
reflected on cobalt blue lake
two sided mirror
a clever use of words in this short piece and well
presented, Gypsy.
The torrential rain is pelting on the Velux winder above my head and gale force wind is so loud I can barely think. Thank goodness we're built on higher ground here in the South and the water all runs away. I feel so sorry for those up North who are getting flooded out.
Margaret
Margaret
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Where do you live? I live in Sacramento, California, USA I am glad you are okay.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku.. Happy New Year!
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In Wiltshire - the South of England - today has been bright and mild - weather's so changeable - usually real cold in January and we often have snow.
Comment from Linda Engel
You have painted a beautiful imagery in just a few words. Even without a picture it is crystal clear your thoughts, Well done. Perfect shade of blue to accompany it.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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You have painted a beautiful imagery in just a few words. Even without a picture it is crystal clear your thoughts, Well done. Perfect shade of blue to accompany it.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku.. Happy New Year!
Comment from Leineco
Ahhh......
what a lovely reflection I see in your haiku
reflection of sun's goodnight kiss
refection of land in the sea
reflection of nature's true bliss
and glimmer of poet's serenity
:-)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Ahhh......
what a lovely reflection I see in your haiku
reflection of sun's goodnight kiss
refection of land in the sea
reflection of nature's true bliss
and glimmer of poet's serenity
:-)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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thank you Lorraine :) I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku. Happy New Year!
Comment from ciliverde
A lovely vision you present ...the mirrored reflection on a still lake at dusk. I can feel the color of it...cobalt blue.
Nice job!
Carol
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A lovely vision you present ...the mirrored reflection on a still lake at dusk. I can feel the color of it...cobalt blue.
Nice job!
Carol
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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Thank you Carol :) I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku. Happy New Year!
Comment from krys123
Gypsy;
-your imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative and also very clever and witty.
-The first two lines of your haiku are grammatically interconnected and also with an imagery that is exquisitely expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-Your third line or satori gives your writing that hot or spontaneous moment and also summarizes the relativity of your concept.
-Good luck in the contest and made the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Gypsy;
-your imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative and also very clever and witty.
-The first two lines of your haiku are grammatically interconnected and also with an imagery that is exquisitely expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-Your third line or satori gives your writing that hot or spontaneous moment and also summarizes the relativity of your concept.
-Good luck in the contest and made the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Thank you Alex, you are very kind. I appreciate you taking the time read and review my haiku and the awesome six stars. This is not for a contest but thank you for the good luck wishes. God be with you
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I'm sorry that I thought was a contest either way you are so very welcome and may you and yours have a very happy new year.
Alex
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no worries, I didn't mind. happy new year to you too. :)
(((((gypsy hug)))))))
Comment from kittykatnoel
Very pretty haiku. These are really nicely done, do have enough to put them all in a book? I really like the imagery and the last line, I don't know what it's called, but they are really good.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Very pretty haiku. These are really nicely done, do have enough to put them all in a book? I really like the imagery and the last line, I don't know what it's called, but they are really good.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much Kat, you are very kind. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku.
Comment from foxangie123
Phenomenal. A six stars would be given you if I had. Amazing write you have created here. You have said it all to the readers, any reader, that views your poem. Awesome.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Phenomenal. A six stars would be given you if I had. Amazing write you have created here. You have said it all to the readers, any reader, that views your poem. Awesome.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much Angie, you are very kind. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my haiku.