Comment from mermaids

Excellent

In poetic form, you tell a story with a happy ending. Your poem reads like a mini movie. I like how the little boy's letter is published in the newspaper and people donate to his family. You have written a poem that shows how much people care.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

thanks miss mermaid and you have a wonderful news and healthy year 24 out thanks miss mermaid and thanks for your time the past year and on this particular peace about away in the pan have a wonderful new hand healthy year 24 out

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Dedicated story about misfortune and struggle. Sad family can't even afford Christmas tree. When banker comes by he doesnt see a tree. Maybe banker will work with Robert.liberty justice

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

Thanks and it is completed now ...
'Thanks Miss Liberty and I had no tree....
How about You?'
Ricky 1024.

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

This a nice segment of what seems to be a good story. I hope it turns out well for them. You might just want to clean it up a bit (i.e. all the symbols surrounding the title and byline.) Otherwise, nice job.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

Thanks but it is not done.
Ricky...