Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "You Broke My Loving Heart In Two"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
29 total reviews
Comment from snooker155
great but don't have flings they spoil the trust you and your partner should have even if only happening in this song it is the wrong message to give but I liked the song anyway from snooker155x
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great but don't have flings they spoil the trust you and your partner should have even if only happening in this song it is the wrong message to give but I liked the song anyway from snooker155x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from acerisestory
Your "lyrics" poem is a good one, Brett -- good flow and rhythm -- and story, of course.
Poor guy. :( He just couldn't understand why fooling around wasn't okay with his woman.
This is my favorite stanza; it made me laugh:
'Why must you always be so mean
Why do you have to cause a scene
Every time I have a fling
Why must you always be so mean'
Now, you need to set it to music, my friend. Take care. Alana
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Your "lyrics" poem is a good one, Brett -- good flow and rhythm -- and story, of course.
Poor guy. :( He just couldn't understand why fooling around wasn't okay with his woman.
This is my favorite stanza; it made me laugh:
'Why must you always be so mean
Why do you have to cause a scene
Every time I have a fling
Why must you always be so mean'
Now, you need to set it to music, my friend. Take care. Alana
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Precious and loving photo personified from horse's point of view. Could be talking about horse's having flings pr humans in love. Beautifully worded dedicated to a player who still wants to keep his or her lover. liberty justice
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Precious and loving photo personified from horse's point of view. Could be talking about horse's having flings pr humans in love. Beautifully worded dedicated to a player who still wants to keep his or her lover. liberty justice
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Saw the picture of the horse and then got thinking what if I had originally written this about a horse? Wouldn't that have been awesome! (I did not. Wrote it long before the picture came alone). Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of lyrics dear brett! i guess the love is unrequited or else why would the loved one be so cruel. i love love but hate to get hurt, like anyone else.
thank you for sharing this delicate poem!
blessings!
rebekka x
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this is a fine piece of lyrics dear brett! i guess the love is unrequited or else why would the loved one be so cruel. i love love but hate to get hurt, like anyone else.
thank you for sharing this delicate poem!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
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Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Brett
what a great song, I have been wanting to write lyrics for a long time nowbut do not have the confidence to do so, I did post one in late December called 'In the throes of glory' which got some good reviews, perhaps you could read it and tell me where I need to improve.
Sometimes people can not see that what they do is wrong, such is life.
Brenda
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Hi Brett
what a great song, I have been wanting to write lyrics for a long time nowbut do not have the confidence to do so, I did post one in late December called 'In the throes of glory' which got some good reviews, perhaps you could read it and tell me where I need to improve.
Sometimes people can not see that what they do is wrong, such is life.
Brenda
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
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Comment from DonandVicki
I had no problem following your lyrics and I could almost hear the tune in my head. Well written and I think the visual that you created with words make your song a nice piece of poetry as well.
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I had no problem following your lyrics and I could almost hear the tune in my head. Well written and I think the visual that you created with words make your song a nice piece of poetry as well.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2016
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Comment from Amy Greta
I love your lyrics! I believe many people will be able to connect with your love song:
"She was just an old time memory"
Those old flames can sometimes simmer for a quite a long time, angering the current flame, I so get it.
I can hear a country song and a twangy southern voice with this, or maybe I've been living in Texas for too long:)
At any rate, it is supurb, you are very talented!
Amy
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I love your lyrics! I believe many people will be able to connect with your love song:
"She was just an old time memory"
Those old flames can sometimes simmer for a quite a long time, angering the current flame, I so get it.
I can hear a country song and a twangy southern voice with this, or maybe I've been living in Texas for too long:)
At any rate, it is supurb, you are very talented!
Amy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Texas Honky-Tonk music would suit them well. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Pantygynt
Hi Brett haven't seen you around for a bit. This sounds like it would make a good C&W lyric like most of your stuff does. It sings to me anyway, which is a good start.
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Hi Brett haven't seen you around for a bit. This sounds like it would make a good C&W lyric like most of your stuff does. It sings to me anyway, which is a good start.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Nope, I wasn't looking for any set pattern or rhythm at all, Brett, but thanks for letting me know just the same.
No, what I look for more than anything else when I read song lyrics is good content. You know, the sort of stuff you can relate to, or something that evokes some sort of deep emotions within you? Because if a song can't so that when you read it, it ain't gonna have any more impact when, and if, it is ever set to music.
Well done...
~Dean
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Nope, I wasn't looking for any set pattern or rhythm at all, Brett, but thanks for letting me know just the same.
No, what I look for more than anything else when I read song lyrics is good content. You know, the sort of stuff you can relate to, or something that evokes some sort of deep emotions within you? Because if a song can't so that when you read it, it ain't gonna have any more impact when, and if, it is ever set to music.
Well done...
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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Hope all is well in your world, my friend. Been slowing down on this site some lately. Will still post lyrics, but currently working with a Publisher here in Nashville who is interested in publishing some of my stories. So, if you only see me around sparingly for a while, that is the reason. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. You know your comments and support are always appreciated. STAY IN TOUCH though. I will also continue reviewing your masterpieces. May take me a couple days to get to them, but I will.
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That's great news, Brett, and best of luck with that endeavor.
I'll be here. I ain't goin' anywhere for awhile.
~Dean
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Have had some FanStorians ask me why I seemed to have disappeared the last ten days or so. Have not told any of them but you about this current project. Not sure I want them to know. I do look forward to seeing what transpires with it though. And, as a Freelancer, I have to pursue the opportunities as they come along.
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Yes, you absolutely do, Brett. They may not come along again.
~Dean
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That's great news, Brett, and best of luck with that endeavor.
I'll be here. I ain't goin' anywhere for awhile.
~Dean
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Yes, you absolutely do, Brett. They may not come along again.
~Dean
Comment from dmt1967
This poem is a good one. He two-timed her but thinks she is mean for leaving her, typical bloke. I love the picture, although horses scare me. I think the poem is well written and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2016
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This poem is a good one. He two-timed her but thinks she is mean for leaving her, typical bloke. I love the picture, although horses scare me. I think the poem is well written and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
