Hawaiian Time
People in Hawaii are laid back33 total reviews
Comment from TallySally
I WANT TO GO THERE!
Always wanted to go to Hawaii!
Your poem has great flow, laid-back rhythm, and beautiful rhyming. Great job.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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I WANT TO GO THERE!
Always wanted to go to Hawaii!
Your poem has great flow, laid-back rhythm, and beautiful rhyming. Great job.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 18-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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thanks so much
Comment from Nicholas Ian Robertson
Nice poem good subject matter love the picture. The poem reads smooth and has a laid back flow. That drves the message deeper. Thank you for posting it. I enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Nice poem good subject matter love the picture. The poem reads smooth and has a laid back flow. That drves the message deeper. Thank you for posting it. I enjoyed the read
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the reviw my friend
Comment from judester
I just love the island life.You promote this with a clever rhyming poem. I love setting my schedule to tides and rising sun, instead of clocks. I am off to Zanzibar next month, where it is quite similar to your island. Cheers judester
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I just love the island life.You promote this with a clever rhyming poem. I love setting my schedule to tides and rising sun, instead of clocks. I am off to Zanzibar next month, where it is quite similar to your island. Cheers judester
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thanks o much for your review have an awesome holiday
Comment from AnnaLinda
Earthwriter,
I was attracted by your gorgeous photo and your words are
just as beautiful as the photo! Loved your "rolling with the tides"
ending as well as your well rhymed lines and inviting imagery.
This could be used by the state to entice travelers to make
Hawaii there vacation destination.
Super! I enjoyed reading this,
Linda
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Earthwriter,
I was attracted by your gorgeous photo and your words are
just as beautiful as the photo! Loved your "rolling with the tides"
ending as well as your well rhymed lines and inviting imagery.
This could be used by the state to entice travelers to make
Hawaii there vacation destination.
Super! I enjoyed reading this,
Linda
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from judiverse
The less hectic pace makes the island life attractive. There's so much beauty to enjoy, too. If there is stress, that must mean there is less crime there than in big cities like Chicago. (I haven't seen "Hawaii 5-0" lately.) Excellent rhyme and flow in this, and you certainly make the reader want to go live in Hawaii. judi
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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The less hectic pace makes the island life attractive. There's so much beauty to enjoy, too. If there is stress, that must mean there is less crime there than in big cities like Chicago. (I haven't seen "Hawaii 5-0" lately.) Excellent rhyme and flow in this, and you certainly make the reader want to go live in Hawaii. judi
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
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You're very welcome. The scenery in Hawaii must be spectacular. judi
Comment from TAB_that's me
I've been to Hawaii twice and find this to be true - peaceful, relaxing and no one in a hurry. I would love to live there but way too expensive.
Great poem:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I've been to Hawaii twice and find this to be true - peaceful, relaxing and no one in a hurry. I would love to live there but way too expensive.
Great poem:)
Teresa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from pattipac
Your poem about Hawaii is so inviting it makes me want to go there. A palace where no one is ever in a hurry, time is depicted by the setting sun, and no one is ever late beckons to me.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Your poem about Hawaii is so inviting it makes me want to go there. A palace where no one is ever in a hurry, time is depicted by the setting sun, and no one is ever late beckons to me.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from TPAC
Nice place I would imagine, writer bring out points well pertaining island's residents. I found it interesting in its conveyance.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Nice place I would imagine, writer bring out points well pertaining island's residents. I found it interesting in its conveyance.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from MAMGALAM
Simple , calm and peaceful lines..like the cool leaves of the coconut palm...!
Living life ..live life - I feel it a sort of repetition ..
Living life surrounded by water..( life surrounded by water )
Live life by the clock..( live by the clock )
It's only my feeling..!
Other wise , the poem is flowing smoothly.
Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Simple , calm and peaceful lines..like the cool leaves of the coconut palm...!
Living life ..live life - I feel it a sort of repetition ..
Living life surrounded by water..( life surrounded by water )
Live life by the clock..( live by the clock )
It's only my feeling..!
Other wise , the poem is flowing smoothly.
Happy New Year.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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i have revised it thank you for your input much appreciated
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
That is a good living strategy where no stress rule and everyone do things as if there is nothing to rush for. When the sun goes down it is time to have a fun time
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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That is a good living strategy where no stress rule and everyone do things as if there is nothing to rush for. When the sun goes down it is time to have a fun time
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thank you so much