Alone
sadness9 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Pierre, I am so sorry I missed this one...when they are in contest they don't show up in our pm's.....when all is gone silence is all a person has...very well written...and a well deserved win...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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HI Pierre, I am so sorry I missed this one...when they are in contest they don't show up in our pm's.....when all is gone silence is all a person has...very well written...and a well deserved win...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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thank you for taking the time to review the poem. i wish after the contest are over they would forward the poem to fans. i miss people as well. take care and happy new year
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you are so welcome...and Happy New year to you as well...I wish they would to...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Liberty Justice
Poet has lost his love. No more laughter or smiles for him. The thrills and joy are gone according to metaphors such as cold winds blowing. The house is very silent NOW. liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Poet has lost his love. No more laughter or smiles for him. The thrills and joy are gone according to metaphors such as cold winds blowing. The house is very silent NOW. liberty justice
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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thank you so much for your kind review. Thanks for the 6th star too!! I went to your sight and the music you selected is beautiful. can you tell me how you set your sight to play music when someone goes to your sight. thx much and happy new year.
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A fan story musician set
music for me.
Comment from judester
Congratulations on the win. You have captured loneliness with this poem.I like the line, my home is now a house. That is so true when the love is no longer there cheers j
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Congratulations on the win. You have captured loneliness with this poem.I like the line, my home is now a house. That is so true when the love is no longer there cheers j
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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thank you for your kind review. i hope you have a happy new year
Comment from Liilia
This poem definitely brings across the feeling of being alone. Even the fact that there is no more mess to clean up adds to the sadness. I like the short, to the point, verses. When grieving for the loss of someone, it seems fitting that just simple words are all that can be said or thought. Thanks for sharing and for using my painting to illustrate.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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This poem definitely brings across the feeling of being alone. Even the fact that there is no more mess to clean up adds to the sadness. I like the short, to the point, verses. When grieving for the loss of someone, it seems fitting that just simple words are all that can be said or thought. Thanks for sharing and for using my painting to illustrate.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I appreciate the use of your painting. It really fits the poem. I hope you have a happy new year-:))
Comment from Sherylsart
This is so sad. I can definitely feel the loneliness. Your poem has a rhythm to it, that emphasizes the utter despair. You definitely hit the mark. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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This is so sad. I can definitely feel the loneliness. Your poem has a rhythm to it, that emphasizes the utter despair. You definitely hit the mark. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thank you for taking the time to read the poem. i appreciate your comments very much . Have a happy new year :-))
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is a very well done piece that just cries out with sadness and loneliness.
dead dreams burn
cold winds blow
warm tears puddle
What great images for sadness!
Great job on this entry for the contest. I wish you luck. Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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This is a very well done piece that just cries out with sadness and loneliness.
dead dreams burn
cold winds blow
warm tears puddle
What great images for sadness!
Great job on this entry for the contest. I wish you luck. Happy New Year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thank you for your kind review. i hope you have a happy new year :-))
Comment from royowen
A very sad, deft, little poem, articulate and smooth, it is also poignantly sad, succinctly expressive and decidedly well presented no nonsense work, most enjoyable, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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A very sad, deft, little poem, articulate and smooth, it is also poignantly sad, succinctly expressive and decidedly well presented no nonsense work, most enjoyable, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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thank you for your kind comments. i very much appreciate your review. happy new year :-))
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My pleasure
Comment from Earthwriter
pretty sad piece i think your writing is very powerful almost a written in stone finality to it excellent imagery throughout well done
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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pretty sad piece i think your writing is very powerful almost a written in stone finality to it excellent imagery throughout well done
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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thank you for taking the time to read the poem and reviewing. i hope you have a happy new year :-))
Comment from zanya
oh yes a distinct sense of loneliness and the tribulations it brings is well conveyed here - we miss so much when we find ourselves isolated and alone and lonely 'my home is now a house'
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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oh yes a distinct sense of loneliness and the tribulations it brings is well conveyed here - we miss so much when we find ourselves isolated and alone and lonely 'my home is now a house'
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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thank you for reviewing the poem. i appreciate your input . happy new year!! :-))
