Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "Suppressed Love"My book of poems and stories
9 total reviews
Comment from BillyCraven
This is a really impressive piece. I think the structure is so rigid that I'm impressed you could say anything meaningful, let alone something so poetic. Really nice use of long vowel sounds, it echoed the rhythm of the sea and the sibilance (i think that's a word) sounded like the waves. well done
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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This is a really impressive piece. I think the structure is so rigid that I'm impressed you could say anything meaningful, let alone something so poetic. Really nice use of long vowel sounds, it echoed the rhythm of the sea and the sibilance (i think that's a word) sounded like the waves. well done
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. I thank you for reviewing and your kind words. I am having fun on this site.
Comment from papa55mike
I love it. It's a wonderful play on words.
How love sometimes slowly disappears in the waves, a little at a time.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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I love it. It's a wonderful play on words.
How love sometimes slowly disappears in the waves, a little at a time.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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How easily we dismiss life events like words washed away in the sand sometimes purposely placed there. I always am so pleased that someone understands the content of what I have written. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Adri7enne
Very nice. I like the way it follows through with one thought, developing it, right to the end.
It follows the form for a septolet and you chose a good piece of artwork. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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Very nice. I like the way it follows through with one thought, developing it, right to the end.
It follows the form for a septolet and you chose a good piece of artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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I am pleased that you have enjoyed my poem. I used to write my heart out to the boy I had a crush on in high school knowing the tide would wash it away. So many ideas come from past experiences. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Leineco
How terribly, sadly true. Written in sand we know will
be wiped clean, we scroll messages before tide's might and send
them into the depths of the deep dark sea - never to be seen
by the one not there beside us :-(
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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How terribly, sadly true. Written in sand we know will
be wiped clean, we scroll messages before tide's might and send
them into the depths of the deep dark sea - never to be seen
by the one not there beside us :-(
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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I am pleased that you have enjoyed my poem. I used to write my heart out to the boy I had a crush on in high school knowing the tide would wash it away. So many ideas come from past experiences. Thank you for your review.
Comment from steevie
Your imagery is strong and conveys clear intentions of thought ...The metaphor of writing your feelings in the sand is akin to the heart speaking without the use of literal words.
well done
I enjoyed your poetry
steve
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Your imagery is strong and conveys clear intentions of thought ...The metaphor of writing your feelings in the sand is akin to the heart speaking without the use of literal words.
well done
I enjoyed your poetry
steve
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a good new year and many more.
Comment from Sambangi
Very creative thinking. Beautiful little poem and a very good entry for this contest. Unexpressed feelings intentionally placed to disappear...nice words. All the best
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Very creative thinking. Beautiful little poem and a very good entry for this contest. Unexpressed feelings intentionally placed to disappear...nice words. All the best
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a good new year and many more.
Comment from trumby
my wife often goes mad at me for this one. But, from what I hear, all men are the same. She says that I swept her off her feet with romantic verses but I can't share my feelings.
I think that it's because of my brain damage
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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my wife often goes mad at me for this one. But, from what I hear, all men are the same. She says that I swept her off her feet with romantic verses but I can't share my feelings.
I think that it's because of my brain damage
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Thank you for your review and Merry Christmas by the way. Have a great year!
Comment from Domino 2
Nice rhyme and 's' alliteration in 1st part. Top visuals, too.
2nd part is cleverly ambiguous to either infer they were 'placed' to be read for a while, OR written on a secret whim.
Bothe parts offer a slightly different perspective which I THINK is what a septolet is for.
Excellent.
Merry Christmas, Ray.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Nice rhyme and 's' alliteration in 1st part. Top visuals, too.
2nd part is cleverly ambiguous to either infer they were 'placed' to be read for a while, OR written on a secret whim.
Bothe parts offer a slightly different perspective which I THINK is what a septolet is for.
Excellent.
Merry Christmas, Ray.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Thank you for your review and Merry Christmas by the way. Have a great year!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Your septolet poem and entry is very unique and I found myself
reading it over and surprised at its depth in so few words. What
an interesting look at words written in sand...two views mirroring
the same thoughts and by your title...even more meaning.
Interesting title as well. Lovely photo choice by helvi2 also.
Linda
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Poet,
Your septolet poem and entry is very unique and I found myself
reading it over and surprised at its depth in so few words. What
an interesting look at words written in sand...two views mirroring
the same thoughts and by your title...even more meaning.
Interesting title as well. Lovely photo choice by helvi2 also.
Linda
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Thank you for your quick and thoughtful review. I was not expecting any today as it is Christmas day. Merry Christmas to you and have a great New Year.
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Merry Christmas and a prosperous new year to you as well:)
