Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

A beautiful ABC poem and so filled with emotion!
A letter left unopened. For how long? You leave
the reader wondering so many things. That's
why it's such a good poem. Good luck in the
contest. -Bill

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015

Thanks for the review Bill. I guess if the letter never gets open, there might be a slim chance.Reading the words inside would make it reality. Cheers j

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A great ABC poetry telling the story of a romance that ended in a last letter that the author can't bear to open. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015

Thanks for the review Sandra, not my favorite type of poem, cheers j

Comment from David Burchell

Excellent

Some much expressed in so few words. The rhythm and vocabulary are set just right. The weariness, hopelessness and futility of the relationship revealed.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015

Thanks for the review. I guess as long as it remains unopened,there might be some chance. Cheers j