Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Powerful and moving. Flows well. Sad and beautiful. Good on you for allowing Jason to give life to four people!! I know that they and their families thank you in their hearts and prayers every day!
One question:
Second from last line do you mean than instead of then?

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015

Thank You Kathleen is that comment on your review about the Jason never see coming through a ZTE Android phone cell phone will be lovely grandma quarters in London send those with no punctuation marks look forward to promoting more chapters there will be 99 Morris the book progresses and honor of Jason the best one of the few ways I have will do that in the future I'm watching me on the TV show the view the waiting for a letter thank you 24 hour

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This was truly an amazing story you have penned. I am so sorry I do not have six stars to give you for this very heartfelt poem you have penned. I am sorry for your loss. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015

Thank you much Terry I Miss Liberty justice just commented also about wishing she had $6 left put them Jason knows and sees and watches anything ever written from him deserve six stars weather got that or not but it was understood or not whether we believe it or not this is Ricky 1024 commenting on the review by Terry of about the story Jason and river see with Miley I

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Sorry no 6s left. My my, there you go again Ricky 1024 unleasing your mesmerizing talents unto the world! I feel the hurt and pain so intensely as you describe your bleeding heart, but you tell that writer in pain that he has a lot to live for and he can't leave this world yet so be strong and hold on liberty justice Peace out

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015

Thanks ever so much miss liberty justice uh actually on my work about jason his life is so amazing auditors sixes and blue ribbon but course to get blue ribbon she need to get it least your man reviews and I don't buy friends on this site for some worry about whether I get to reviews are 200 reviews I can see some people getting because a buyer way into the very beginning of the team story catalog f*** yourself more people have more chances to see in and sit there for morning 2 days thank you much for your comments is a ricky 1024 casting is coming on love you bye liberty just is coming to an android g t phone with complete chronicle bars in running since is with no punctuation marks on 24 out

Comment from cj lutton

Excellent

Your words of hope and redemption should be read by everyone.

If I have one minor critique, please use spell-check and grammar programs.

The very minor errors of "then and than" took away the ebb and flow of your beautiful sentiment.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks very much CJ sometimes I write on this phone so it means a lot of grammar work it takes 10 minutes to read it out and then 2 hours and put the proper punctuation marks and spaces in on everything I never really run any poetry with complete run on sentences like ice maker of the book you know with. And then the word network bus start on the same line I've always liked everything in kind of early fashion with the proper punctuation marks at the beginning and end quotations all all that stuff but when it comes the words like then and than and other words like dying dying Dieng a lot a lot of those words mean the same thing they're just spelled differently I think one would be Old English you want American English its only difference you know another one bleeding in lying you know somebody said something about mixing them up and I actually looked up both of them in the Collier Webster's and they both mean exactly the same thing so technically it depends on the person reviewing as to whether or not that would be there style writing an hour I've actually written in Old English style and it's a beautiful way to write you know what the house and b and very religious to live right on my religious works that way and I have read from a book on American literature or English literature and I could see the degree and with the definitions of the words and how about how well they are agitated and how well they are pronounced you know but thanks for your review and thanks for your comment on the van and then and than I used in almost all the time everyone so I'll throw a van and if I think it goes there but I was never very good at that in grade school but like you said their clothes off on the content of the phone and imagery you I always believed that the poem should be rated first on imaging and content before grandma call issues coming to play overseas so many terrible terrible one two three and four star reviews based on my grammar and then I stated I was too busy and have offered after you spell check or whatever the case was I right in the library time is running out you know where I just didn't feel like shopping and I thought it was okay you know I've been commented with turbo reviews loved by people that I know where were either passed English teachers and high schools are professors in college and work with the word you know a bit even those people have not a clue cannot write let alone from the mind and the heart broken the mind heart and soul and also cyclic from above all that's how my work comes that's where it, that's why this book it is stating that that would my login in with my thoughts are with my son in there you know that was only the first chapter that was pre written there's 100 chapters totals and 99 more that I will work on with your bf think my 36 or 37 book this year was just way off my pace thanks very much c_j com I'm on the right thomas phone so I need a lot of drama work it takes 10 minutes to read it out and in 2 hours in with it punctuation marks in spaces in on everything I've never really road in poetry I would complete run and send it like this wake up of a bubble now with. 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