Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Frontier Doctor"Poems about the old West.
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Comment from Mr. Green
Nancy, your talent is something to be respected and loved. Most of the poems I have read by you, I sometimes feel like you witnessed the story in the poem itself. Your knowledge of poetry and your ability to put into words a picture or a vision of the poem is something I have admired for a long time. You have done it in this poem as well.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
Nancy, your talent is something to be respected and loved. Most of the poems I have read by you, I sometimes feel like you witnessed the story in the poem itself. Your knowledge of poetry and your ability to put into words a picture or a vision of the poem is something I have admired for a long time. You have done it in this poem as well.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the awesome review, Larry. I wrote this after watching a movie that had a doctor like this one. I felt like the frontier doctor needed his story told. They had to be dedicated. I know at times it was the horse doctor who attended them. LOL Thanks again for the six. Big Hug! You have no idea what you have done for my ego. Nancy:)
Comment from Ric Myworld
Although I've never lived a life in the old west, like most kids who were my age, there is a special love for what we grew up watching and emulating. You're able to bring it all back and make it seem so real.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
Although I've never lived a life in the old west, like most kids who were my age, there is a special love for what we grew up watching and emulating. You're able to bring it all back and make it seem so real.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thank you for this, Ric. Yes, I was in love with the old west from my earliest memories. Gene Autry was my hero. Those Saturday Afternoon Matinees were all the rage. Then there was Hoppy.
Hop-A-Long Cassidy! What sort of name is that? LOL Thanks for the review! Nancy:)
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a beautiful poem, Nancy, and tells a great story. I am glad you are reviving these poems as I wasn't on here when you shared them before.
Anything worth writing is worth sharing again.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
This is a beautiful poem, Nancy, and tells a great story. I am glad you are reviving these poems as I wasn't on here when you shared them before.
Anything worth writing is worth sharing again.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and stars, Anne. Have a lovely Sunday. Nancy:)xxxx
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Thank you, Nancy, may your Sunday be blessed as well.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such an enjoyable, upbeat verse in praise of the frontier doctor. Your verse well crafted with lovely rhythm almost echoing the regular trot of the horse. It has a very fitting old-fashioned tone that skilfully takes the reader back into another bygone age. Thanks for sharing, Nancy.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
This is such an enjoyable, upbeat verse in praise of the frontier doctor. Your verse well crafted with lovely rhythm almost echoing the regular trot of the horse. It has a very fitting old-fashioned tone that skilfully takes the reader back into another bygone age. Thanks for sharing, Nancy.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the awesome review and stars, Debbie. You made my day! Hugs Nancy:)xxxx
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An absolute pleasure! Dx
Comment from Carol Clark2
A nice job on your poem! Yes, a frontier doctor had much to do without many resources or supplies. Thankfully we have many live-saving tools and medications now. Good rhymes and rhythm in your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
A nice job on your poem! Yes, a frontier doctor had much to do without many resources or supplies. Thankfully we have many live-saving tools and medications now. Good rhymes and rhythm in your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the review and stars, Carol. Nancy:)xxx
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You're welcome. Have a blessed week.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem about a dedicated family doctor in the country. Unfortunately those days have long gone and it is hard to get a house call these days. Excellent rhyme and metre in this nostalgic and well written poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
An excellent poem about a dedicated family doctor in the country. Unfortunately those days have long gone and it is hard to get a house call these days. Excellent rhyme and metre in this nostalgic and well written poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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It is, but Our Dr. came to see Rhonda here at home a few weeks before she died. He must have known. Thanks for the review and stars Wendy. Nancy:)xxxx
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the way you've so thoroughly created a character, letting us see his kindness, his family situation, how others see him, even his relationship with his horse, all while using perfect rhyme and meter -- no easy feat! You truly made me like and respect the character. You're an expert storyteller, and I particularly love the occasional midline rhymes you throw in. Another excellent job!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
I love the way you've so thoroughly created a character, letting us see his kindness, his family situation, how others see him, even his relationship with his horse, all while using perfect rhyme and meter -- no easy feat! You truly made me like and respect the character. You're an expert storyteller, and I particularly love the occasional midline rhymes you throw in. Another excellent job!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Michele, You are such a boost to my confidence. Sometimes I get so discouraged and depressed. Thank you for your lovely words of praise. I appreciate your friendship and critic. Hugs Nancy:) xxxx
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To my mind, you and EasyEverett are the two best poets on the site. Not to disparage any other writers, many of whom are amazing, but the two of you are practically flawless! I'm pleased and honored to be your friend, Nancy. Have a lovely weekend!
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I'm pleased and honored to be your friend too, Michele. Thank you for the wonderful compliment. Nancy:)
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Comment from lyenochka
I wish there were doctors like him today. Too many are in that field to make money and not care for their patients. And all of them are trained in such a specialized field that they can't help the overall health of the patient. Great story poem, Nancy!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
I wish there were doctors like him today. Too many are in that field to make money and not care for their patients. And all of them are trained in such a specialized field that they can't help the overall health of the patient. Great story poem, Nancy!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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I certainly do agree with you on that. Have a wonderful day, Helen and Thanks. Hugs Nancy:) xxxx
Comment from June Sargent
Even when we grew up in the 50's we had doctors who made home visits. These days we have trauma centers where we wait half a day! Those old frontier doctors were literally life savers.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
Even when we grew up in the 50's we had doctors who made home visits. These days we have trauma centers where we wait half a day! Those old frontier doctors were literally life savers.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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I agree. Things have changed a lot now with too many specialists and not enough general practitioners. Have a great day, June. Nancy:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Always well metered and with great rhymes here your story poem is a great read Nancy and I enjoyed the ride. A skilfully put together write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
Always well metered and with great rhymes here your story poem is a great read Nancy and I enjoyed the ride. A skilfully put together write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for the review and stars Dolly. Have a nice day. Nancy:)xxxx