Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Good Time Man"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from c_lucas
Some are into a loving game, never want to make it a real relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015
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Some are into a loving game, never want to make it a real relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015
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Comment from CEO2020
Good Time man reminds me of Guitar Man. I didn't know if I should view it as lyrics in a song or as a poem...so I read it as a poem in a song and concluded -
"A good time man that's all I be
A good time man living wild and free
You gave your heart to a fool like me
A good time man could never set you free."
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2015
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Good Time man reminds me of Guitar Man. I didn't know if I should view it as lyrics in a song or as a poem...so I read it as a poem in a song and concluded -
"A good time man that's all I be
A good time man living wild and free
You gave your heart to a fool like me
A good time man could never set you free."
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
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Comment from Lesley Collier
An interesting poem of lyrics of a man mourning the loss of a lover as he partied wild and free until
his loss made him realize what was meant to be. Well written with a catchy refrain and a lesson in those poignant words!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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An interesting poem of lyrics of a man mourning the loss of a lover as he partied wild and free until
his loss made him realize what was meant to be. Well written with a catchy refrain and a lesson in those poignant words!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Comment from pierre poote'
Really like your lyrics. wish we could hear the song. it's hard to play the field and hold onto real love. i am assuming this is not a marital affair but a young couple dating. merry Christmas :-))
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Really like your lyrics. wish we could hear the song. it's hard to play the field and hold onto real love. i am assuming this is not a marital affair but a young couple dating. merry Christmas :-))
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Comment from Reedblitzerman
Brett after the first couple of stanzas I was visualizing the Black Keys playing this is some dirty little dive bar, or a concert in a field. Thank you for sharing, this was a really enjoyable work. I thought I could see the tension as he was deciding if he wanted to keep up his traveling ways or not. Thank you again.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Brett after the first couple of stanzas I was visualizing the Black Keys playing this is some dirty little dive bar, or a concert in a field. Thank you for sharing, this was a really enjoyable work. I thought I could see the tension as he was deciding if he wanted to keep up his traveling ways or not. Thank you again.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Brett :)
I like your good time man song. I can imagine a catchy tune to go with your lyrics. At some point, we all have to make a choice about love, do we want a good time or a soulmate? Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Hello Brett :)
I like your good time man song. I can imagine a catchy tune to go with your lyrics. At some point, we all have to make a choice about love, do we want a good time or a soulmate? Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
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Comment from Leineco
Right from the start, a sort of melody evolved for me (a sort of
country-pop crossover bop) :-)
I like the way the singer fluctuates between being madly
in love and sorry that he done her wrong and admitting
he's all about the party. It's had to accept rejection (even
when you know you caused it - so falling back
onto - "Hey, it was all just for fun" is a natural default. But
it's clear, he really is heartbroken.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Right from the start, a sort of melody evolved for me (a sort of
country-pop crossover bop) :-)
I like the way the singer fluctuates between being madly
in love and sorry that he done her wrong and admitting
he's all about the party. It's had to accept rejection (even
when you know you caused it - so falling back
onto - "Hey, it was all just for fun" is a natural default. But
it's clear, he really is heartbroken.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
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Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true. At some stage or other we all have to make the decision to give up the good times, or not as the case may be.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true. At some stage or other we all have to make the decision to give up the good times, or not as the case may be.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
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My pleasure.
Comment from dragonpoet
If he really is a good time man, he will never have lasting love. He has lost her unless he change can truly commit. To keep her he needs realize he loves her and only her and give up his roving. But I don't know if he'll ever do that. How sad.
It makes a nice country song.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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If he really is a good time man, he will never have lasting love. He has lost her unless he change can truly commit. To keep her he needs realize he loves her and only her and give up his roving. But I don't know if he'll ever do that. How sad.
It makes a nice country song.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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You're welcome. No problem.
dragonpoet
Comment from randman58
Seems to be a perfectly fine set of lyrics
A somebody did somebody wrong song. Could fit many styles but it does have a country song feel to me.
Fifth Stanza; "This is more than I can take from you" sounds like you're blaming her for your mistake. And why should she care about your "poor" heart when you cheated on her.
Tenth stanza; Should maybe be worded a little more contrite "So I will gladly go through hell" "To get to the kiss and tell"
But hey I'm just a hack. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Seems to be a perfectly fine set of lyrics
A somebody did somebody wrong song. Could fit many styles but it does have a country song feel to me.
Fifth Stanza; "This is more than I can take from you" sounds like you're blaming her for your mistake. And why should she care about your "poor" heart when you cheated on her.
Tenth stanza; Should maybe be worded a little more contrite "So I will gladly go through hell" "To get to the kiss and tell"
But hey I'm just a hack. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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"So after I go to Hell". (As in she told him where to go). Somehow I always liked that expression, and wanted to include it in one of my lyrics. Glad you enjoyed this. Your comments and support appreciated.
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OK, now I get it.
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OK, now I get it.
