Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like tales of the sea and at least Charley died doing what he loved and despite his illness. You tell a tale in poetic form, it has vivid images of the sea and the desire of one, who wanted to follow his dream.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015

Thanks so much an enjoyably piece to write!
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Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I enjoyed the story of Charley, his determination to work in a ship despite his current disease. He dreamt for so long which became a reality at the age of forty and ended up a hero, a cripple saving a drowning man in the sea. This is a celebration of triumph in the life of Charley. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015

Yes nauss us so Charlie was a hero or live is riding with the picture I'm sure there would be non fiction all true so many times over if I would know the stories in the names of the people which would make for an amazing book would you not think comment on the review of the cripple Charlie Matthews, coming through a ZTE Android phone will complete run in tent in the punctuation marks and Grandma call her cell 24 hour

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is not very much fun being born a cripple, especially when you are surrounded by healthy siblings. This has an underscore of anger in it. Take it one day at a time.

Either you beat your disability or it will beat you.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015

Finished in ten...
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