The Gift of Life!' III.
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5 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that captures how much you miss your son. The reader feels your loss and the waiting to see him again. Your words have a musical feel to them, I can hear your poem to music.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Excellent use of words that captures how much you miss your son. The reader feels your loss and the waiting to see him again. Your words have a musical feel to them, I can hear your poem to music.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Yes as previously mentioned....
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Comment from Paul Greatrix
This was moving. I can easily imagine this being read out in church as a requiem. I felt pain in this, but I felt love too. The combination of those two sentiments made this very powerful.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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This was moving. I can easily imagine this being read out in church as a requiem. I felt pain in this, but I felt love too. The combination of those two sentiments made this very powerful.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Thanks Mr. Paul. My6 piece...
'The Seven Laws of Judification' {based on evil} would work well in that sector, also.
Ricky1024
Comment from royowen
A very sad and poignant work, dedicated to the passing of your son Jason, all those years, fine, moving words that touch the heart, of those of us who have young ones, this will remain and add to the other tributes to your little boy, my belated sympathies and thoughts, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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A very sad and poignant work, dedicated to the passing of your son Jason, all those years, fine, moving words that touch the heart, of those of us who have young ones, this will remain and add to the other tributes to your little boy, my belated sympathies and thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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"My gift {from above} is to touch."
"Touch thy Hearts...
"Touch thy Minds...
"And finally...
"Touch thy sorrowed of Soul."
Thanks,
Ricky 1024k
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Welcome
Comment from Angels27
Any parent can easily associate with the feelings and emotions of losing a child. The flow of thoughts was very eloquent. Thoughts are indeed tangled webs stretched and lost forever...
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Any parent can easily associate with the feelings and emotions of losing a child. The flow of thoughts was very eloquent. Thoughts are indeed tangled webs stretched and lost forever...
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for your kind review and your kind words of sympathy I've had two other 5 star reviews on this and seem similar thoughts from two men one apparently lost their child I've actually use your artwork twice cuz I know you're also a person on the fan. Reviews so I didn't know you were right there are a few that right and Duart so I can do or what does I'm joining up I'm on a member but I have been submitted anything yet you know my daughter Karen Alexis she's a real artist she's done some amazing works with some color pencils acrylic paints regular straight pencil she just has the talent to look at something and the draw lit with hardly any hesitation at by I can copy well but it takes me quite a while to do it I just never was educated on how to properly do structure and I'll that's basically it I seen her structure work am I seeing her other work the teacher of the right when she was in junior and senior so thanks again on this is Ricky 1024 comment on the reviews on my gift of life free book which I am in a try to promote that on the view they were waiting for me to get it a letter to them and I'm waiting to get Dorrance publishing of the work on it everything I do if it isn't many computers handwritten so I thank you very much for the review on the returning Ricky 1024 on a ZTE Android phone will complete run in sentences no punctuation marks and grammar 24 hour
Comment from Joyce Long
It is so very difficult to lose a child. I can only say how sorry I am and that I can share your lose.
Be thankful for the time you had with him.
This is very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-21-15
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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It is so very difficult to lose a child. I can only say how sorry I am and that I can share your lose.
Be thankful for the time you had with him.
This is very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-21-15
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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So glad you enjoyed this gift of a lifetime Joyce with just one of her I would ask to meet somewhere between 500 and $1,000 written now and Chris 13 years Ricky 10:24