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The Gift of Life!' III.

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A book on living after!

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Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. I have read some of your other works before this one. I always found them to be unique. You have a different style of writing which takes some getting used to. I didn't know if I liked it or not at first but the more I read the better I like your writing. Good work

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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trophy for the very first poem it was televised on HBO I met Tony Orlando and Dawn I danced with a female friend of a poet right in front of them there will be major accomplishments in the future as I tackle the seven laws of justification from the first which is drug and alcohol addictions to the 2nd which is the tobacco industry warning smoking cigarettes can cause cancer not correct not complete warning cigarette smoking can and will eventually cause cancer and cause you to die from emphysema and lung related incident the oil industry Exxon Valdez an example that God does not want that oil brought to the surface is meant to stay below there's a reason for it he knows as a bring it up its utilizing the many different forms from seating purposes the fueling automobiles witch constantly pollute the air we breathe it in as we're walking by its slowly causing us of lesser life it's everywhere is this coming up to factory smoke stacks if you utilize them run machinery oil gasoline 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Comment from Ekim777
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Can we ever know or understand the plight of those who suffer life in the shadow of death and the vice verse. Oh the loss of confrontation, l left with the unanswerable question but can we ever be whole again. Can we gather the strength to progress through suffering? I think so.
Ekim777

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
    Part one of two still working...
Comment from Neonewman
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Wow! Intense piece you have well crafted here my friend! So many strive to get on with their lives after the loss of a loved one. I couldn't even imagine losing a child.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
    Part one of two...Working...
reply by Neonewman on 20-Nov-2015
    Awesome!
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    Completed!
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    Completed!
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    Completed!
reply by Anonymous Member on 24-Nov-2015
    Awesome!