A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Just A Word"Assorted poems of love
35 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yes, it's that racing heart that makes the longing, the waiting, the missing (him) all worth it (for me, anyway, and for you too, apparently... - *grin*). Your free verse says it freely. *big, BIG smile*. LOVED it! I'm so darn sorry I'm so far behind!!!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Yes, it's that racing heart that makes the longing, the waiting, the missing (him) all worth it (for me, anyway, and for you too, apparently... - *grin*). Your free verse says it freely. *big, BIG smile*. LOVED it! I'm so darn sorry I'm so far behind!!!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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You are fine precious, I am sitting here looking at 98 unanswered messages. I am so messed up.
Thanks for being my friend.
Missy
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98? only 98? Try over four thousand, my love. No kidding. I am completely unable to keep up and I would rather be return-reviewing if I have to choose...sigh...(but my conscience is beating the heck outta me every time I have to sign off!) YOU are the best - thank YOU for being MY friend!!! (I'm so forgetful, negligent...oh heavens, I'm blessed with kind and understanding friends!!!)
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98? only 98? Try over four thousand, my love. No kidding. I am completely unable to keep up and I would rather be return-reviewing if I have to choose...sigh...(but my conscience is beating the heck outta me every time I have to sign off!) YOU are the best - thank YOU for being MY friend!!! (I'm so forgetful, negligent...oh heavens, I'm blessed with kind and understanding friends!!!)
Comment from Brian Terry
That is so beautiful and an enormously effective structure.
I have been on line much I've been in hospital I think all my bits and pieces are wearing out
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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That is so beautiful and an enormously effective structure.
I have been on line much I've been in hospital I think all my bits and pieces are wearing out
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Brian, I am just sick with worry over you. I hope you recover nicely from whatever is going on and get back to writing.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, hon.
Missy
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, so sorry I am so late to review...I am a bit behind...but you are so right...it's those words that keep your heart beating...those beautiful words of love that make you want to hear more...and hope they never stop...so very nicely written...and your picture...perfect...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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HI Missy, so sorry I am so late to review...I am a bit behind...but you are so right...it's those words that keep your heart beating...those beautiful words of love that make you want to hear more...and hope they never stop...so very nicely written...and your picture...perfect...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Linda, hon, thanks so much for this review!!! I'm into next month behind... Lol
Missy
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I fall back quit a bit myself...LOL...not to worry...you are so welcome sweet girl...and have a wonderful Thanksgiving Missy...xxoo Love Linda
Comment from Neonewman
Absolutely! Words are a very powerful tool (be it constructive or destructive) in the school of life. I wish I had a sixer remaining, for this one is absolutely worthy Missy!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Absolutely! Words are a very powerful tool (be it constructive or destructive) in the school of life. I wish I had a sixer remaining, for this one is absolutely worthy Missy!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Thank you, for this lovely review, Steve. Your thought to award a 6 is plenty my friend :)
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
This was a great poem, it hit on that special part of love, the part that only the lovers see and feel. Great job, I really enjoy your romantic poems, they always leave me wanting more.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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This was a great poem, it hit on that special part of love, the part that only the lovers see and feel. Great job, I really enjoy your romantic poems, they always leave me wanting more.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Smiling...Thank you! It is all we can hope to do with our words is touch another human being. :)
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. Yes, I have had that feeling before. You tell of it so well in this poem. Words are notalways necessary are they?
"I wait ...sometimes days at a time
For just a word
When it comes ...my heart leaps
You do that for me"
:) Blessings and thanks for sharing. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Hi, Missy. Yes, I have had that feeling before. You tell of it so well in this poem. Words are notalways necessary are they?
"I wait ...sometimes days at a time
For just a word
When it comes ...my heart leaps
You do that for me"
:) Blessings and thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Bob. So nice to see you here :)
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
How true. We are always so happy to hear from those we love. The time in between can be an eternity. Your free poem is like a journal entry, ruminating, thoughtful. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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How true. We are always so happy to hear from those we love. The time in between can be an eternity. Your free poem is like a journal entry, ruminating, thoughtful. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Hi, Marilyn, thanks for the lovely review. Yeah the time in between can feel like forever.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Ulla
Ah, Missy, what a lovely romantic soul you are. This is a beautiful poem about that little thing like a word. Just one word that hits the heart strings. Lovely. All the best. Ulla
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Ah, Missy, what a lovely romantic soul you are. This is a beautiful poem about that little thing like a word. Just one word that hits the heart strings. Lovely. All the best. Ulla
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Ulla, precious, thank you for such a sweet compliment :)
Your review made me smile, sweetie.
Missy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi there Ms Missy((((((( ... Isn't it just truly magical that mere words can produce an emotion so strong and vibrant that it shapes our thoughts and staggers our breath?
What a stunning presentation... the stunning visual set up something so soft and comforting sprinkled with emotive anticipation in wait for further connection... and yes, that sounds like a truly beautiful connection? Anything that tingles the heart and senses in such a way, can't be bad or wrong, right?
Yes Missy, something so special written within these words simple, direct and precise... flying like an arrow to its prescribed-destination... very lingering tones!
With our thoughts we create,
a heart connection,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Hi there Ms Missy((((((( ... Isn't it just truly magical that mere words can produce an emotion so strong and vibrant that it shapes our thoughts and staggers our breath?
What a stunning presentation... the stunning visual set up something so soft and comforting sprinkled with emotive anticipation in wait for further connection... and yes, that sounds like a truly beautiful connection? Anything that tingles the heart and senses in such a way, can't be bad or wrong, right?
Yes Missy, something so special written within these words simple, direct and precise... flying like an arrow to its prescribed-destination... very lingering tones!
With our thoughts we create,
a heart connection,
James vx's.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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James, I want to say something brilliant, but words escape me, at the moment.
Your review is a delight to see :) Thank you ever so much.
Missy
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Hey((((((((((... just wanted to tell you... read your emails, but something's wrong with being able to send a reply... so as soon as it's back up and running you'll have my retort... had to go for treatment on my injury at the end of this week and well, didn't come back all that spritly and I am suffering a tad... and on Tuesday, I travel to have scans... it's been a long time coming... but my beautiful wife Jade has a chronic anxiety condition... and Iv'e been holding off hoping I would just repair, but it ain't happening... so as you can imagine it's a bit tense around home at present... but I tell you more on that when I can... anyway sweet Missy, love you and talk soon... right? vx's.
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Absolutely! Take care :) James. My thoughts are with you :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
A wink or a whistle beats the heck out of a glance, and it saves time, too. It makes that person know what's on your mind, rather than guessing if the glance means anything. LOL. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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A wink or a whistle beats the heck out of a glance, and it saves time, too. It makes that person know what's on your mind, rather than guessing if the glance means anything. LOL. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
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Can't hear or see a wink or a whistle on the internet or a letter, sugga!
Thanks for the smile and the great review!
Missy
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Nope, you can't hear or see a wink or a whistle on the internet, but the professionals say that even a simple smile can be felt by those we are communicating with. Beats me, and yes, it sounds crazy. But they swear by it. Can you see my smile? Did you feel that faint touch of my lips on your forehead? Oops, sorry, don't smack me, it wasn't real, just imaginary. I wanted to know if the pros are right. :-)
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So that's what soft warm feeling was :)
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So that's what soft warm feeling was :)
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So that's what soft warm feeling was :)