Paris, Friday the 13th
real-life horror15 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A very timely entrant into this competition. Fits the 5-7-5 structure perfectly. Good presentation and a great denouement in the final line.
Good luck
GMG
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Hi there,
A very timely entrant into this competition. Fits the 5-7-5 structure perfectly. Good presentation and a great denouement in the final line.
Good luck
GMG
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and critique my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from wordspinner314
Your poem is relevant and emotionally taught. It's so true that horror can be very real to life, which makes it scarier than anything we can make up.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Your poem is relevant and emotionally taught. It's so true that horror can be very real to life, which makes it scarier than anything we can make up.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Irish Goat
poignant horror 5-7-5 referencing the French terrorist shooting of last week. All requisite structural attributes are present, to include correct syllable counts, and minimalist punctuation and capitalization. Well done
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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poignant horror 5-7-5 referencing the French terrorist shooting of last week. All requisite structural attributes are present, to include correct syllable counts, and minimalist punctuation and capitalization. Well done
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and critique my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
_ This is another excellent entry for the prompt.
- Yours is the second poem to take write about reality and not fictional.
_ Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Hi,
_ This is another excellent entry for the prompt.
- Yours is the second poem to take write about reality and not fictional.
_ Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is indeed TRUE horror, mystery writer. It doesn't get any more real than the Paris attacks.
I especially liked your third line ... "insanity strikes" ... isn't that the truth! Perfect choice of artwork to accompany your write.
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Horror contest. Best wishes in that regard.
bichonfrisegirl
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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This is indeed TRUE horror, mystery writer. It doesn't get any more real than the Paris attacks.
I especially liked your third line ... "insanity strikes" ... isn't that the truth! Perfect choice of artwork to accompany your write.
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Horror contest. Best wishes in that regard.
bichonfrisegirl
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
