Paris, Friday the 13th
real-life horror15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a poignant write and yes, horror does not always have to be a movie or book theme. Often horror can strike right in our home or neighborhoods. Patricia Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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This is a poignant write and yes, horror does not always have to be a movie or book theme. Often horror can strike right in our home or neighborhoods. Patricia Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Your real life 5-7-5 horror entry is in good form.
Your satori is right on and your presentation is
gripping.
You did an excellent job on a difficult and tragic subject,
Linda
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Poet,
Your real life 5-7-5 horror entry is in good form.
Your satori is right on and your presentation is
gripping.
You did an excellent job on a difficult and tragic subject,
Linda
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you, SweetLinda, for taking the time to read and review my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Dean Kuch
The horrors lurking in the real world today are far more terrifying than anything Stephen King or Dean Koontz could concoct, even with their brilliant imaginative minds. Random shootings and mass killings in movie theaters and shopping malls, beheading of children on video, the bloated decaying corpses of refugee children, drowned and washed ashore, who never quite made it to their new homes. And, of course, the latest terrorist attacks on Paris, France and 9/11, lest we forget.
I could go on, and on, and on...but I won't. It's far too depressing.
Well done. Good luck in the voting booth.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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The horrors lurking in the real world today are far more terrifying than anything Stephen King or Dean Koontz could concoct, even with their brilliant imaginative minds. Random shootings and mass killings in movie theaters and shopping malls, beheading of children on video, the bloated decaying corpses of refugee children, drowned and washed ashore, who never quite made it to their new homes. And, of course, the latest terrorist attacks on Paris, France and 9/11, lest we forget.
I could go on, and on, and on...but I won't. It's far too depressing.
Well done. Good luck in the voting booth.
~Dean
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thanks, Dean, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
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Anytime, Sherry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words say so much in such a small space. Good job with the syllable count and the [s] alliteration. We were all shocked and deeply saddened by the events of that night in Paris. Your poem has a great strong message. It was a horror. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Your words say so much in such a small space. Good job with the syllable count and the [s] alliteration. We were all shocked and deeply saddened by the events of that night in Paris. Your poem has a great strong message. It was a horror. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Leineco
Shots shatter the night
Tables, blood and people fall
Insanity strikes
The horror of real life! Timely write - and too real for comfort :-(
Nicely written
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Shots shatter the night
Tables, blood and people fall
Insanity strikes
The horror of real life! Timely write - and too real for comfort :-(
Nicely written
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from l.raven
this is worse than any horror show...it has to stop...or it will all come to an end...very well written.....and your picture says it all...
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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this is worse than any horror show...it has to stop...or it will all come to an end...very well written.....and your picture says it all...
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
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you are always so welcome Sherry...xxoo luff
Comment from Sueswrite
Because this is true horror and these simple eleven words couldn't have said it better, you deserve an exceptional rating. Fantastic 5-7-5! Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Because this is true horror and these simple eleven words couldn't have said it better, you deserve an exceptional rating. Fantastic 5-7-5! Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Also, of course, for the sixth star. Having been away for awhile, it means a lot.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Nice job with the 5/7/5 horror poem contest entry. It is true, the worse kind of horror is the kind that happens in real life. Good job with the syllable count. Good luck!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
Nice job with the 5/7/5 horror poem contest entry. It is true, the worse kind of horror is the kind that happens in real life. Good job with the syllable count. Good luck!
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Reality is more horrific than fiction. Fiction is born out of imagination. This is born out of hate and a true horror story. Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Reality is more horrific than fiction. Fiction is born out of imagination. This is born out of hate and a true horror story. Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Welcome to the world of terrorists.
Well written poem that uses terms such as "insanity strikes," and "blood and people fall," to much better illustrate the stupidity of these terroristic attacks.
Should be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Welcome to the world of terrorists.
Well written poem that uses terms such as "insanity strikes," and "blood and people fall," to much better illustrate the stupidity of these terroristic attacks.
Should be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
have a great weekend - sherry
