2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "5/7/5 (putrid cadaver)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
47 total reviews
Comment from Ekim777
Well we were all God's children at some time or other. And I know a picture can speak a thousand words but your pictures confuse me. I mean I have not mastered the art of horror, I mean we must respect all forms of life and I believe that everything must fit into its own place even within the tight confines of the haiku. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Well we were all God's children at some time or other. And I know a picture can speak a thousand words but your pictures confuse me. I mean I have not mastered the art of horror, I mean we must respect all forms of life and I believe that everything must fit into its own place even within the tight confines of the haiku. -Ekim777
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Zombies are not real and they are not alive so I don't understand why we should respect them. 'this is a horror 5/7/5 contest and zombies are scary monsters. I am sorry you were confused. thank you for the review.
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Zombies are not real and they are not alive, so to say they are God's creatures doesn't make any sense. I don't know why the pictures confused you, it is a horror poem contest the pictures are part of horror monsters. This is NOT a haiku, It is a 5/7/5 poem, they are different and have different rules. If you go to the contest link you will see the only requirement is the syllable count. Anyway, thank you for the five stars.
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I stand corrected!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Typically I steer clear of horror poems, but since this was short...
I'll try to step out of my comfort zone here.
Your entry poem is in fine form and that middle line stands
out strong for the theme of the contest with nice alliteration
with "bag of bones" as well.
I hope that virus is stopped in its tracks pronto!
Linda
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Poet,
Typically I steer clear of horror poems, but since this was short...
I'll try to step out of my comfort zone here.
Your entry poem is in fine form and that middle line stands
out strong for the theme of the contest with nice alliteration
with "bag of bones" as well.
I hope that virus is stopped in its tracks pronto!
Linda
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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:) Thank you Linda, I am glad you took a chance and gave this poem a chance. I really appreciate your awesome review.
Comment from JanPerry
I have absolutely no idea who this masterpiece of ghoul eating brains belongs to. But perhaps the blood is a giveaway. Lovely man rolling to one side with no eyes. Zombies, I saw them in a movie not long ago. Don't they ever go back to the grave and stay there?
aaaah now, black on white, who in hell does that? I cannot even guess.
Have fun!!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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I have absolutely no idea who this masterpiece of ghoul eating brains belongs to. But perhaps the blood is a giveaway. Lovely man rolling to one side with no eyes. Zombies, I saw them in a movie not long ago. Don't they ever go back to the grave and stay there?
aaaah now, black on white, who in hell does that? I cannot even guess.
Have fun!!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
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heheh
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Hi there Gypsy. Your work reminds me of that Dean Kuch guys work. Do you have a crush on him? I am asking because I do. Major!
He is incredibly cute I think.
Jan. aaaah
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Yes, I do have a crush on him LOL probably a few women do in this site. He is cute and has a brilliant mind. I love horror so his poems and stories are my favorites.
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oh, he said "at least someone does". He doesn't seem to think anyone does. lol
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LOL I think he knows :)
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...well...I have my guess who done penned this here little horror picture.
good luck in the contest...and don't go out at might until the results are in...you never know what may infect...
padumachitta
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Hi...well...I have my guess who done penned this here little horror picture.
good luck in the contest...and don't go out at might until the results are in...you never know what may infect...
padumachitta
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A perfect 5/7/5 for the horror contest. They don't come more horrific than this with graphic pictures to accompany. There is a familiar stamp about this kind of submission. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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A perfect 5/7/5 for the horror contest. They don't come more horrific than this with graphic pictures to accompany. There is a familiar stamp about this kind of submission. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from TomyKan
A gory photo accompanies your 5-7-5 poetic story. I liked the expression "soulless bag of bones". I take it that a virus was the cause of death. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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A gory photo accompanies your 5-7-5 poetic story. I liked the expression "soulless bag of bones". I take it that a virus was the cause of death. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :) Zombies are victims of a virus.
Comment from danpald
Well the poem meets the test
Formed with both the theme and jest
Hope the voters are not eaten
When the Zombies come to choosing
Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Well the poem meets the test
Formed with both the theme and jest
Hope the voters are not eaten
When the Zombies come to choosing
Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery Author, (I wonder who you are he he he) this is a really god entry for this particular competition, suitably gory with great graphics and wonderful word description, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Hi Mystery Author, (I wonder who you are he he he) this is a really god entry for this particular competition, suitably gory with great graphics and wonderful word description, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
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My pleasure gypsy.
Comment from snooker155
great picture of zombies but a rather average poem it was rather too predictable but the fantastic picture stopped me from giving it a lower rating. sorry try again from snooker155x
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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great picture of zombies but a rather average poem it was rather too predictable but the fantastic picture stopped me from giving it a lower rating. sorry try again from snooker155x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Your review and score doesn't mean anything to me. I have been getting excellent reviews for this 5/7/5 poem. You just don't know this type of poetry.
Comment from playinaround
Well done. Super descriptive and scary. 'Walking Dead' Is my family's favorite show. That is what this poem reminded me of. Perfect for halloween. Thank you for sharing this short but impacting poem!
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Well done. Super descriptive and scary. 'Walking Dead' Is my family's favorite show. That is what this poem reminded me of. Perfect for halloween. Thank you for sharing this short but impacting poem!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :) Thank you for the six stars :)