Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Oh ,there you go... parting is such sweet...
oh no you don't!
take that!
;)
lol
well done, I think this is the most fun to be had...
reading all these entries

good luck in this contest!
Cat

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thank you, Catty!

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

THere's a reason, Old William Shakespeare never wrote limericks. If he did he would have to contend with the likes of you and your fine tragi-comedic limerick. Great job, and funny.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thanks, Jay.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your limericks summing up the story of R & J. The flow was great. I could understand all of what you stated in a fun way. Good job with the prompt. I see no changes. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

This poem is obviously a parody of the classic Romeo and Juliet.I enjoyed the way it was presented injecting humor in the poetic lines. Thanks for sharing your work to the readers.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thanks for reading this.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

::applause:: applause :: Bravo

(tosses roses onto the stage)

Now why couldn't Old Willie have written all his works so clearly? LOL

Nicely done synopsis in limerick form :-)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015

Thank you!
:)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

HAHAHAHA! This should do VERY well in this contest I think - it's funny and very much like our famous bard might have written, at least topic-wise, yes? HAHAHAHA! "Engulfed in a fiery stew..." HMmm, yup, one could say that, I guess.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015

Thank you, Dawn.

reply by Dawn Munro on 17-Nov-2015

You're welcome. :)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This sums up the plot of Romeo and Juliette very well. You have kept the Limerick style throughout and chosen your words well. Nicely presented, too, Good job!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015

Thank you for reading it.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

If Willy wrote limericks I'm sure this would have been proud of these, Nicely written for the contest. All three limericks are wonderful and I can't chose a favourite, thankfully I don't need to. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015

Thank you for reading this poem.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I think you did a creative job with this contest topic. The rhyme was so natural - very well done. The story here was terrific and you can read into it. Very creative.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015

Thank you for reading this poem, Michael.

Comment from Irish Goat

Excellent

nice triple limerick for the Willie Contest. Good use of language to satiate both the Elizabethan feel and traditional limerick bawdiness. Only one misspelling in 'Montague'... Well done

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you for spotting my typo. I've got it fixed.
:)
Thanks!