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Comment from MacMhuirich
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Nicely written 5-7-5, so much truth in so few words, if man loved one another would there be the problems of today? It seems to be the biggest impediment between men - love.
Thank you for sharing
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
    Thanks John for reading this little poem And yes Love is a powerful tool if we could just make it go round everywhere. I am so pleased you looked the this one too Cheers Christine 😀
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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Love is something that the terrorists might have felt at one time but then again maybe not. Love is what can bring someone out of the darkest times of their lives. Love is amazing

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Hi ExperiencingLiphe. Thanks you for reading and reviewing my 5-7-5 entry and yes love is amazing and we need to cling onto that thought and hope things will improve soon With appreciatin for comments Cheers
Comment from frogbook
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Great message. Very interesting, everyone's take on this prompt. Artwork is very complimentary to the piece as well. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Hi frogbook Thanks you so much for having a read of my 5-7-5 and reviewing thisxalso with lovely comments much appreciated Cheers
Comment from Irish Goat
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nice 5-7-5 that has all the requisite properties, like syllable counts and minimalist capitalization and punctuation. It does, however, accentuate LOVE LOST within the text, giving a second message from this 13 word piece. Nicely done

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Hi Irish Goat Thanks for your comments and review for this 5-7-5 and for picking up the LOVE LOST message ( I thought this may have a double meaning as i.e. Love Lost may translate into hate and I think that is what has happened the love has been lost and replaced with hate maube a bit left field LOL anyway appreciate your support Cheers
Comment from mauial
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Good poem on a subject that is revelent today. But to me hate keeps the hater lost in a sea of despair, because those who love are not in that sea, because we see a way out.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Hi mauial Thanks you for your review and comments for my 5-7-5 . I hope that one day love will take over from all the hate in the world. I suppose I meant that everyone seems to be in despair trying to come to terms with what is happeneing in the global society. Lets hope soon we fond a peaceful loving solution .Appreciate your support Cheers
Comment from mvbrooks
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Your message of hope is very timely--although HOPE is always needed. The image is a great match, showing the whole world being comforted.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Thanks you mybrooks for your thoughtful comments and Hope and love is what is needed by all in the world today, so pleased you stopped by to read my 5-7-5 .Cheers
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Yeah, well...we'd all like to think so, wouldn't we? I mean faith, hope, love, and giving are the cornerstones of civilized societies, are they not? People have to remain rigid and stand united in times like the ones we're all facing today. There is strength in numbers.

Together we stand.
Divided we fall.

Well done. Good luck to you in the booth.
~Dean

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Hi Dean . One can only hope that a peaceful solution may be found, and perhaps if all society could take a look at what is happening to out world we may see what fools we really are and for what ? Still I like to think the majority of the human race is decent law abiding loving citizens, but it seems minority rules at the moment. Really appreciate you support and good luck wishes Cheers
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Poet,

You have a fantastic message that rings loud and clear in those
few syllables. Love does prevail and you expressed that so well
in your outstanding entry.

Linda

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Thanks Linda very much for your lovely review and comments I am glad you liked this and lets hope the message gets across soon With Cheers to you
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Mystery writer: great advice and photo. Love is the answer of bullies abusing, world terrorist destroying lives, and people accepting grace of Jesus. Love changes hearts and connects to Christ. Great poem. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    Thanks flylikeaneagle for you lovely worrds for my poem and yes Love is the answer to many things. And hope for a better future. So appreciative of your support .Many Cheers
Comment from Annette Gulliver
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A good entry for this 5-7-5 poetry prompt.
Very good artwork as well. Your words convey a message important to all mankind in these uncertain times. Annette

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank Annette for reading and reviewing my 5-7-5 prompt. Yes it is an uncertain time and I hope the future will improve. appreciate your time and comments Cheers
reply by Annette Gulliver on 18-Nov-2015
    good luck in the contest