Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Texas And Teardrops"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Nosha17
Interesting lyrics incorporating the main cities of Texas. Someone lost their heart in one or all of those places. Good use of rhyming and an enjoyable read. faye
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Interesting lyrics incorporating the main cities of Texas. Someone lost their heart in one or all of those places. Good use of rhyming and an enjoyable read. faye
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Comment from Irish Goat
Written with the qualities of a ballad, or a country song. Nice use of repetition, a chorus and had a good rhyme flow throughout. Nice piece, and as a Texan -resonated with me a bit. Good job
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Written with the qualities of a ballad, or a country song. Nice use of repetition, a chorus and had a good rhyme flow throughout. Nice piece, and as a Texan -resonated with me a bit. Good job
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Comment from judiverse
Great lyrics. I like the atmosphere with your reference to all the cities in Texas. The reference to the fiddles playing also adds to the melancholy tone. Another tale of a lost love. I can picture the guy driving around to different parts of Texas, and thoughts of the gal stay with him. Come on, he's a big, tough Texas guy. He surely won't let a faithless gal keep him down for long. Excellent rhyme in this, and it all comes together marvelously. judi
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Great lyrics. I like the atmosphere with your reference to all the cities in Texas. The reference to the fiddles playing also adds to the melancholy tone. Another tale of a lost love. I can picture the guy driving around to different parts of Texas, and thoughts of the gal stay with him. Come on, he's a big, tough Texas guy. He surely won't let a faithless gal keep him down for long. Excellent rhyme in this, and it all comes together marvelously. judi
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Even big, tough Texas guys lose their loves once in a while. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're very welcome. I enjoy your lyrics. They are your forte. Happy trails. judi
Comment from MelB
Reads and plays out like an old country song. I think I even read it with some twang! I could picture a video of it with the guy singing and flashing to the girl somewhere else and then with another man.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Reads and plays out like an old country song. I think I even read it with some twang! I could picture a video of it with the guy singing and flashing to the girl somewhere else and then with another man.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
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Comment from Tessa Kay
there's a lot of melody in this poem. I love how 'Texas and tear drops and neon light' roll off the tongue. Amarillo by morning, Laredo at night gives a feel of restless travel. Well done. :)
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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there's a lot of melody in this poem. I love how 'Texas and tear drops and neon light' roll off the tongue. Amarillo by morning, Laredo at night gives a feel of restless travel. Well done. :)
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well written poem and lost your love on a lonely starry night. You are left alone and she does not have a care, because she went away with her new love.
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Very well written poem and lost your love on a lonely starry night. You are left alone and she does not have a care, because she went away with her new love.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Lone Star is the nickname of the state of Texas. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Ok, I understand.
