Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Ricky1024,
This is a moving write that utilizes emotional language and the universal thought that parents would rather take the place of a suffering child. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

"Yes, My first and most beautiful poem of over hundred's
of thousands starting my need to fulfill my place on Earth
with God's message...
"And 'The Breathing Thing' is based on Earth {as a vacuum]
being oxygenated by {of course} by Heavenly Father.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024d

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

"In that hand of yours I left my heart." This brought tears to my eyes--not just for your lost, but for mine, too. I mention earlier that we had lost both our children. We also lost a grandson and two great-grandbabies in the Joplin tornado. "I left my heart in your hands." Life can send many different obstacles for us to overcome.
Thank you for sharing.
Joyce 11-13-15

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>"Heart in Hands<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
******************************************By Ricky 1024************************************
{a poem for a review}
1 minute written and slammed!
{For your eyes only}
"My heart tis of thee...
'Sweet Land of unity...
'To thee I bring...
...
'One father left behind...
'One soul left to die...
'For no good reason or rhyme...
'I give to thee...