Comment from gamay

Excellent

Hi Ricky,
This very nice and touching story,
Its so interesting story about Brian lacked of love in his family.
As a parent's we try our best to care for them and not goes in a crocked way.
keep coming,
God bless,
gamay

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

Always a pleasure to meet gamay.
A true writing of friend...
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Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

This is so sad, Ricky.
We never really know what will happen to our kids because of the ones they hang out with. As parents we try our best, but destiny intervenes.
:) ellen

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

Thanks for that Mr. Dog.
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Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Ricky1024,
This is a hard-hitting write of fiction. Solid dialogue and elicits strong emotions and reactions. Good work. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

Thanks ever so much Gracie.
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Comment from MLEaton

Average

I'm sorry - I know I have come into this chapter not having read anything of it previously, but I have read it three times and still can't quite understand what is going on! This may be because the punctuation needs some attention but it would also be useful to have some indication of what has gone before.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Not done read and re-review please in about the time of 7.
Thanks,
Ricky..