Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Marv. I'm glad to see that you're back on track with your story. This segment is of good length. Back and forth dialogue with Dolores flows well, progresses from renewed content, to making up, to a clandestine meeting at Maisies Muffins (great name). Will look for next post. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015

Marilyn

This chapter took a while because of other obligations and it just took time.
I like the way you point out items I've included, without my striving to do so. Your review is pleasing and makes me want to write.
Sometimes, in the back of my head, I figure on reconsidering a name, but Maisie's Muffins is a keeper. Glad you like it.
Thanks for taking the time to review this chapter and the many stars.
Marv

reply by BeasPeas on 14-Nov-2015

You're welcome.

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

Lively conversation and it is quite interesting,some tips given what all we can do with flowers ;)- I like when the story runs mostly through conversations and not just plenty of narrations. It just did that

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Thanks for all the kind words.
I strive for a balance of conversation and narration, but they need not be equal.
Thanks for the very nice rating.
Marv

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Interesting, easy reading. Sounds like it will be an amusing work as it goes along. Dialog was smooth and the banter was humorous.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015

Thanks for reviewing chapter 25 of my Rom/Com. Your words are very encouraging.
I hope we meet again. Thanks for the stars.
Marv