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The Gift of Life!' III.

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A book on living after!

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Comment from nancyrabbrose
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Rickey1024
That is an amazing poem you have written about your feelings upon losing your son, the continuing feelings. How wonderful that you can put into words part of what you are feeling. I pray that you will continue to heal. Losing a child of one's own we never completely get over, but, as you indicate, you are going on because your son would want you to. I hope that he is felt, spiritually. I hope you can talk to him and write him letters as you have created a beautiful poem because your love is so great. I will pray for you.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
    Appreciated and only God and my late Wife Carolyn can feel this pain.
    Ricky 1024
Comment from P1
Excellent
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not5 to======== just needs a little edit here
i am heartbroken reading your sad story
i cannot imagine what it would be like to lose
a child and like you i know i would never recover
i hope writing gives you some comfort and thank
you for being brave enough to share.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
    I'm still missing me but how can that be?
    I don't feel like I'm alive...
    So I do want to run and hide.
    But the "Killing Field" is beckoning and I hope {after all] when I meet my maker}
    The next accident with s kid, they will need an Under Taker!
    Ricky 1024.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Good
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Good. I would love to give you six stars, but you have an awful lot of typos in this writing. the story is sad and I can feel for you as I lost my 16-year old son in 1985. It hurts as bad today as it did at the time. So sorry for your loss.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
    Thanks no grammerical errors just my style.
    Ricky 1024.