I'll Get Some Rest
Exercise can be deadly.17 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
Hi Lance,
You put an exercise disclaimer on this? ;) that's funny....
you have to, you know? Because you just never know when
someone 'will try this at home'. ;)
lol
This was fun, Lance. ;)
I enjoyed this.
Cat
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Hi Lance,
You put an exercise disclaimer on this? ;) that's funny....
you have to, you know? Because you just never know when
someone 'will try this at home'. ;)
lol
This was fun, Lance. ;)
I enjoyed this.
Cat
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015
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Cat. Lol. Thanks for the review. I would hate for someone to get eternal rest do to my poem. Lol. Have a blessed week. God bless.
Comment from Zue65
I really had a good laugh in this one. The art work with beer belly touching the floor definitely complements the message of your poem and adds to the fun. This should be posted too in the Poetry category. All the best.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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I really had a good laugh in this one. The art work with beer belly touching the floor definitely complements the message of your poem and adds to the fun. This should be posted too in the Poetry category. All the best.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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Thanks. I tried to get it to poetry and couldn't get it over there. Thanks for the review. God bless.
Comment from amada
Lovely and instructive your work here. Yes, exercise is important but it needs to be done graciously, in accord to our body. Great imagery as well. It was fun to read.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Lovely and instructive your work here. Yes, exercise is important but it needs to be done graciously, in accord to our body. Great imagery as well. It was fun to read.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Amada. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. God bless.
Comment from abbasjoy
This is great advice. If you haven't exercised for a long time, you must take it a little at a time, and increase the pace gradually. It is also very important to check with your doctor first, otherwise you might well find yourself having a heart attack.
Love the picture, especially because that is exactly how we would look if we don't heed the good advice you have given.
Good rhyming and meter usage.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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This is great advice. If you haven't exercised for a long time, you must take it a little at a time, and increase the pace gradually. It is also very important to check with your doctor first, otherwise you might well find yourself having a heart attack.
Love the picture, especially because that is exactly how we would look if we don't heed the good advice you have given.
Good rhyming and meter usage.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Thank you abbasjoy for taking the time to read and review my poem. God bless.
Comment from ann marie mazz
good afternoon lance
how very true
exercise is important
we fist must know what our bodies can handle
if our bodies and heart can handle the stress
you have given a very worthy message to remember
your entry is upbeat and playful
you showed the fun side
you also managed to convey a message
it was clever of you to utilize baseball
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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good afternoon lance
how very true
exercise is important
we fist must know what our bodies can handle
if our bodies and heart can handle the stress
you have given a very worthy message to remember
your entry is upbeat and playful
you showed the fun side
you also managed to convey a message
it was clever of you to utilize baseball
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Ann. Thank you so much for the kind review. I greatly appreciate it. God bless.
Comment from MacMhuirich
This is wonderful, I fear I'd be lying at home base when you crawled in. This was fun to read and your cartoon is priceless. Thank you for sharing your wonderful humour.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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This is wonderful, I fear I'd be lying at home base when you crawled in. This was fun to read and your cartoon is priceless. Thank you for sharing your wonderful humour.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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John. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you got a kick out of it. God bless.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Some of the simpliest forms like this produce such fun little poems. You have a good message in in too in your fun way.
teresa
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Some of the simpliest forms like this produce such fun little poems. You have a good message in in too in your fun way.
teresa
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Teresa. Thanks for the kind review. I had let myself get extremely overweight at one point. I have shed a lot and humor has helped me get back to where I am. God bless.
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA! This is an adorable poem that surely will resonate with many others as it does with me! (It's in the wrong category though - under 'fiction' and not 'poetry' - Evil Eddie strikes again. LOL) I enjoyed this very much, remembering my days playing baseball and then trying to return to it many years later - got one heck of a cramp in my thigh running to first! *grin*
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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HAHAHAHA! This is an adorable poem that surely will resonate with many others as it does with me! (It's in the wrong category though - under 'fiction' and not 'poetry' - Evil Eddie strikes again. LOL) I enjoyed this very much, remembering my days playing baseball and then trying to return to it many years later - got one heck of a cramp in my thigh running to first! *grin*
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the review. I thought I had it under poetry but found out it wasn't. Lol. God bless.
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Same thing happened to me just about a week ago. ...sigh... (LOL)
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is great! You are so right, exercise is very important and I have learned the hard way about pushing myself too hard. lol. This is a lot of fun and I love the cartoon adding more frustration to this piece. Thank you for sharing. God Bless
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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This is great! You are so right, exercise is very important and I have learned the hard way about pushing myself too hard. lol. This is a lot of fun and I love the cartoon adding more frustration to this piece. Thank you for sharing. God Bless
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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OnyxSapphire. Thanks for the kind review. It was fun to write. God bless.
Comment from doggymad
This was such fun. I imagine this is what I would look like if I started running. Walking will do fine.
Thank you for putting a smile on my face with this witty work
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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This was such fun. I imagine this is what I would look like if I started running. Walking will do fine.
Thank you for putting a smile on my face with this witty work
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015
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Freda. Thanks for your kind review. God bless.