Life Never Ends
I believe in Life Before, During and After this time around.58 total reviews
Comment from Millibrad
This is beautifully written. I share your belief that these bodies of ours are merely garments of flesh, that we are essentially spiritual beings. Best of luck in the contest and God bless.
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This is beautifully written. I share your belief that these bodies of ours are merely garments of flesh, that we are essentially spiritual beings. Best of luck in the contest and God bless.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time.
Comment from robyn corum
I don't know the author - I don't think - but I was very impressed the this piece and the writing skills displayed. This was a warm and thoughtful piece. I enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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I don't know the author - I don't think - but I was very impressed the this piece and the writing skills displayed. This was a warm and thoughtful piece. I enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thank you for reading and for commenting. I appreciate your time and good wishes.
Comment from Adri7enne
What a nice write! I really enjoyed your outlook on the continuation of life. I hold similar beliefs and I also experienced a close connection to my late husband and continue to feel his presence l5 years after his passing. I don't fear death, although the idea of pain is a bit fearsome. Death itself is similar to the way you explain it. It's just a change of clothing for an eternal soul.
I enjoyed all your wonderful stories - your uncle James, your mother's passage, and finally, your loss of your husband and friend. A lovely sharing post. Good luck in the contest. I see a winner here, I feel sure. Well done, author.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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What a nice write! I really enjoyed your outlook on the continuation of life. I hold similar beliefs and I also experienced a close connection to my late husband and continue to feel his presence l5 years after his passing. I don't fear death, although the idea of pain is a bit fearsome. Death itself is similar to the way you explain it. It's just a change of clothing for an eternal soul.
I enjoyed all your wonderful stories - your uncle James, your mother's passage, and finally, your loss of your husband and friend. A lovely sharing post. Good luck in the contest. I see a winner here, I feel sure. Well done, author.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for your kind and supportive words and WOW, 6 stars! Made my Saturday. I appreciate the vote of confidence.
Comment from RodG
This essay really explains and ILLUSTRATES your attitude toward death. Some might claim it's too long, but I loved the anecdotes and really feel I got to know your uncle and your mother. And it all segues into your conclusion beautifully. I admire your straight-forwardness and your craft.
P.S. That photo is indeed a perfect illustrations of your theme.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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This essay really explains and ILLUSTRATES your attitude toward death. Some might claim it's too long, but I loved the anecdotes and really feel I got to know your uncle and your mother. And it all segues into your conclusion beautifully. I admire your straight-forwardness and your craft.
P.S. That photo is indeed a perfect illustrations of your theme.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thanks for reading and for understanding my endeavor to 'illustrate' my ideas. I appreciate your time and your comments.
Comment from alvina224224
Very well done, author. In contrast to you, death didn't come near me when I was younger, apart from a message from those concerned. I was living in Australia when my Nana and my Dad died, and although I saw my mother the day before she died I did not see her dead. I was 73 when I stood by my darling husband and held him as he died. I would not believe he had gone, and pulled the warm blanket up under his chin to keep him warm. And at 82, I am still staggering from the unexpected death of my lovely sister. Reading your essay has instilled a belief in me, that they are still around me
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Very well done, author. In contrast to you, death didn't come near me when I was younger, apart from a message from those concerned. I was living in Australia when my Nana and my Dad died, and although I saw my mother the day before she died I did not see her dead. I was 73 when I stood by my darling husband and held him as he died. I would not believe he had gone, and pulled the warm blanket up under his chin to keep him warm. And at 82, I am still staggering from the unexpected death of my lovely sister. Reading your essay has instilled a belief in me, that they are still around me
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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I am so sorry for your loss! When my husband died almost 13 years ago now, I thought I could not survive. I took ten months off from work and I wrote a memoir. When I finished it, I knew I was a survivor. You are too and good thoughts are in the air for you. Your lost loved ones are there and all the good memories can be used to fill the awful hole in your heart. Thanks for sharing.
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Bless You
Comment from mvbrooks
Very effective first sentence--sets tone and mood for the story and begins to reveal aspects of the narrator/main character.
"My mom had been sick for several years, but not an every-day kind of sick, more of a 'hanging-in-the-air' kind of sick."
--great description
Suggestions:
"Oh, there were times where I wished to live to certain dates, until my youngest child reached adulthood, until my oldest grandchild had passed a similar milestone...."
--consider replacing the comma after "certain dates," to a colon -- thereby signaling a list. On the first read, it was unclear that "until my youngest child reached adulthood..." was the first item in a list.
"I had a favorite uncle, though suffering from enough human frailties and weaknesses to fill a book, took the..."
--consider adding "who" after "uncle"
"I had a favorite uncle who, though....
Editing note:
"It was spellbinding and grabbed by attention..."
--change "by" to "my"
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Very effective first sentence--sets tone and mood for the story and begins to reveal aspects of the narrator/main character.
"My mom had been sick for several years, but not an every-day kind of sick, more of a 'hanging-in-the-air' kind of sick."
--great description
Suggestions:
"Oh, there were times where I wished to live to certain dates, until my youngest child reached adulthood, until my oldest grandchild had passed a similar milestone...."
--consider replacing the comma after "certain dates," to a colon -- thereby signaling a list. On the first read, it was unclear that "until my youngest child reached adulthood..." was the first item in a list.
"I had a favorite uncle, though suffering from enough human frailties and weaknesses to fill a book, took the..."
--consider adding "who" after "uncle"
"I had a favorite uncle who, though....
Editing note:
"It was spellbinding and grabbed by attention..."
--change "by" to "my"
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much for really useful suggestions. I will re-read my post now with your suggestions in mind. I truly appreciate your time and your comments.
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
There are a couple of people in my life that makes me want to live for I don't know what they would do if they did not have me. For as for fearing death, I don't! I used to, but as we get older ( especially if we are a Christian ) we realize that death is only the beginning of what matters! The Bible teaches that: It is appointed unto man, once to die and after that the judgment. A good write, my friend! Cletus Hardiman
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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There are a couple of people in my life that makes me want to live for I don't know what they would do if they did not have me. For as for fearing death, I don't! I used to, but as we get older ( especially if we are a Christian ) we realize that death is only the beginning of what matters! The Bible teaches that: It is appointed unto man, once to die and after that the judgment. A good write, my friend! Cletus Hardiman
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thank you for your time and sharing of your views with me.
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You are always welcome for my review! Drop by and see me sometimes on the site! I'll keep the lights on for you! LOL Clete
Comment from Sis Cat
This is an excellent response to the writing prompt. Your story and journey resonated with me. I have lost people close to me recently--my parents--only to discover that they were not truly lost in the sense of oblivion, but that their love comforts, guides, and guards me daily. You are right to point out that the connections continue and the uncanny contacts grow. This is a comforting essay on the subject that speaks from experience. It is odd that in a way I am closer to my parents now because we are not limited by time or space. Our love is eternal. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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This is an excellent response to the writing prompt. Your story and journey resonated with me. I have lost people close to me recently--my parents--only to discover that they were not truly lost in the sense of oblivion, but that their love comforts, guides, and guards me daily. You are right to point out that the connections continue and the uncanny contacts grow. This is a comforting essay on the subject that speaks from experience. It is odd that in a way I am closer to my parents now because we are not limited by time or space. Our love is eternal. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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I'm sorry for your loss.....but so happy for your continued connection with your parents. thanks for reading my essay and sharing your thoughts with me. Life is good!!
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so true. Life continues after death. Professor Brian Cox said that he believes in reincarnation because in science, energy never dies. It only transfers into another state.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so true. Life continues after death. Professor Brian Cox said that he believes in reincarnation because in science, energy never dies. It only transfers into another state.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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I agree with Professor Brian Cox! Thanks for reading and sharing.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Barry1000
This is impressive writing. If there were five-and-a-half stars, I would prefer that rating. I believe I found a couple of minor typos in my first reading, however the story is moving to say the least and the message is clear. Having lost my Father, my wife, my son, and my grandson at ages much, much too early and others long before I was ready, I identify strongly with the sentiments expressed. While I don't accept the premise of the continued presence of people or their spirits and their ability to somehow interact with us after death, I believe that they remain as powerful influences and their love and their values, ideals, and personalities cannot help but affect how we think, act, and feel.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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This is impressive writing. If there were five-and-a-half stars, I would prefer that rating. I believe I found a couple of minor typos in my first reading, however the story is moving to say the least and the message is clear. Having lost my Father, my wife, my son, and my grandson at ages much, much too early and others long before I was ready, I identify strongly with the sentiments expressed. While I don't accept the premise of the continued presence of people or their spirits and their ability to somehow interact with us after death, I believe that they remain as powerful influences and their love and their values, ideals, and personalities cannot help but affect how we think, act, and feel.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your comments. I will re-read to see if I see the typos so they can be corrected. I appreciate your views and your time.
