Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "I believe nature has the key"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from LoannaLois
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Hi Loanna, What happened here with your review the text is all gone wiered,???? Mary
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My computer went down for awhile and I was unaware!! Forgive me. I truly loved what you wrote.
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no problem Thanks
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wonderfully done and a different aspect on believe.
Everything is connected and when one thing is out of whack, it sets another in motion and then things go aray.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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wonderfully done and a different aspect on believe.
Everything is connected and when one thing is out of whack, it sets another in motion and then things go aray.
Nicely done
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thanks for your review and intelligent comments, much appreciated.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your artwork selection to establish the mood for your poem and its interpretation of the prompt. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "carousel" simile, along with your sharing your wisdom. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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I admired your artwork selection to establish the mood for your poem and its interpretation of the prompt. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "carousel" simile, along with your sharing your wisdom. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thanks Joan for such an encouraging review.
Comment from LanceHill
This is a beautifully written poem. The rhyme and flow allow for an enjoyable read. I have always said "You can't make it to the future if you live in the past." It is sad to see areas destroyed do to human choice. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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This is a beautifully written poem. The rhyme and flow allow for an enjoyable read. I have always said "You can't make it to the future if you live in the past." It is sad to see areas destroyed do to human choice. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks Lance for your excellent review and great comments.
Comment from MacMhuirich
You have crafted a beautiful piece of poetry for the contest, wonderful form, rhyme and flow.
'the beauty of nature's creation,
free for all to enjoy creative participation.' - so true and it's a shame that so many people overlook this. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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You have crafted a beautiful piece of poetry for the contest, wonderful form, rhyme and flow.
'the beauty of nature's creation,
free for all to enjoy creative participation.' - so true and it's a shame that so many people overlook this. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks John for your excellent review and great comments. much appreciated.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a rather apt and fitting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. Nature does indeed hold the key. Nature is resilient and can adapt, but we must also be more careful in future.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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This is a rather apt and fitting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. Nature does indeed hold the key. Nature is resilient and can adapt, but we must also be more careful in future.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks tomes for your excellent review and great comments.
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My pleasure.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good job. You explain the interconnectivity and interrelationship of all elements of nature. Yes, you were very right. I specially like your concluding two lines as it explained that despite the beauty of the universe, there are still some wicked people that still destroys what Mother Nature bestow on us:
"supported by Mother's Earth most fertile soil,
saddened by those who make choices to spoil." Nicely done job.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Good job. You explain the interconnectivity and interrelationship of all elements of nature. Yes, you were very right. I specially like your concluding two lines as it explained that despite the beauty of the universe, there are still some wicked people that still destroys what Mother Nature bestow on us:
"supported by Mother's Earth most fertile soil,
saddened by those who make choices to spoil." Nicely done job.
ola thomas
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and great comments.
Comment from Curly Girly
It is a lovely poem about an ideal world and universe. Even if those others were to stop polluting the universe, the earth's time would still be limited. The earth is not eternal. Millions of years behind, yes, how many more in the future? Whatever the answer, it is a limited one.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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It is a lovely poem about an ideal world and universe. Even if those others were to stop polluting the universe, the earth's time would still be limited. The earth is not eternal. Millions of years behind, yes, how many more in the future? Whatever the answer, it is a limited one.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hi
I appreciate your excellent review, I believe about 2 and a half billion more years, but the humans may well be gone by then.
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Unless there is a meteor ... or an atomic bomb ...
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true
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a wonderful and well presented entry for this particular competition, a well penned poem with good rhyming and proximate rhyming, the rhythm is good as is the flow, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is a wonderful and well presented entry for this particular competition, a well penned poem with good rhyming and proximate rhyming, the rhythm is good as is the flow, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks Eric for your excellent review and great comments. I really appreciate it.
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Ulla
Oh this is a lovely poem that pays tribute to Mother Nature. It's wonderfully structured, and written. I especially liked the last verse. It's so true. Good luck in the contest. Ulla
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Oh this is a lovely poem that pays tribute to Mother Nature. It's wonderfully structured, and written. I especially liked the last verse. It's so true. Good luck in the contest. Ulla
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks Ulla for your great comments and for your excellent review.