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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Innocent children suffer"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from Unspoken94
I want to congratulate you on winning the contest. If I was going to lose, I'm glad it was because of your profoundly sensitive poem. As a therapist that has significant experience in working with children and adolescents who have had to face a life-threatening illness, this poem is so understanding of the pain parents experience. Again, congratulations. -Bill (Mine was Choices II)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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I want to congratulate you on winning the contest. If I was going to lose, I'm glad it was because of your profoundly sensitive poem. As a therapist that has significant experience in working with children and adolescents who have had to face a life-threatening illness, this poem is so understanding of the pain parents experience. Again, congratulations. -Bill (Mine was Choices II)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hi Bill, I really appreciate your congratulations particularly when you were so close to winning, I enjoyed your entry and felt it was going to win. You have made my win even more joyous with this lovely review.
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is absolutely heartbreaking. I am so sorry to all of the parents out there who have had to go through this, my prayers are with you. This is very well written and will make anyone feel sadness. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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This is absolutely heartbreaking. I am so sorry to all of the parents out there who have had to go through this, my prayers are with you. This is very well written and will make anyone feel sadness. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your excellent review and great comments.
Comment from fimarie78
A very touching poem. No child deserves to suffer like this. I liked the simplicity of this poem and the idea of the cat waiting at home made it really personal.
best of luck in the contest
Fiona
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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A very touching poem. No child deserves to suffer like this. I liked the simplicity of this poem and the idea of the cat waiting at home made it really personal.
best of luck in the contest
Fiona
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and grat comments.
Comment from Ben Colder
My daughter and the family well know about this. We spent much time at the Children's Hospital before losing our Nathan to this dreadful sickness. Hope you win your contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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My daughter and the family well know about this. We spent much time at the Children's Hospital before losing our Nathan to this dreadful sickness. Hope you win your contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks Ben for your encouraging review. I am so sorry about your daughter's loss.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
It is true, children suffering is the worse kind. They die from abuse, neglect and disease. Your poem is well written and thoughtful. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Hello :)
It is true, children suffering is the worse kind. They die from abuse, neglect and disease. Your poem is well written and thoughtful. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks Gypsy
Comment from frogbook
Poignant and compelling. Would indeed be the worst suffering to see a child this way. Well said. Great idea. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Poignant and compelling. Would indeed be the worst suffering to see a child this way. Well said. Great idea. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your encouraging review
Comment from LanceHill
Such a powerful poem you have penned. I pray those that endure such loss are able to find comfort. When children suffer it is difficult to see or understand. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Such a powerful poem you have penned. I pray those that endure such loss are able to find comfort. When children suffer it is difficult to see or understand. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your most encouraging review.
Comment from TomyKan
A gripping poem of suffering, now and after this poor child is dead. You capture how all parents must feel. Well written.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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A gripping poem of suffering, now and after this poor child is dead. You capture how all parents must feel. Well written.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your most encouraging review.
Comment from Ricky1024
Pregnant so is a lost have a child to a parent when in time of need is really not much indeed I too have experienced the rows of that lost my Sun 2003 and 8 months later my wife unfortunately couldn't handle the pain and decided 216 from her life and now rests in her box next to his for an eternity spell special thanks to all come on love the gift of giving of life from my friend Laura is heredity LSW in Philadelphia giraffe - 50 + States from the southern of the Florida to the northern of Washington a state all you care givers to Mass every day in hospitals all over this states of United to convince those who have been strict and that there are others that away and need to be guided with kidneys and hearts and livers in corneas of sight the pancreas is skin graph to all who wait and sorry dead of night 4 the gift of life for the unfortunate circumstance because feet maybe your date but Miss destiny will never be late and she has the final say that's all I have to say nice piece here Ricky 10:24
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Pregnant so is a lost have a child to a parent when in time of need is really not much indeed I too have experienced the rows of that lost my Sun 2003 and 8 months later my wife unfortunately couldn't handle the pain and decided 216 from her life and now rests in her box next to his for an eternity spell special thanks to all come on love the gift of giving of life from my friend Laura is heredity LSW in Philadelphia giraffe - 50 + States from the southern of the Florida to the northern of Washington a state all you care givers to Mass every day in hospitals all over this states of United to convince those who have been strict and that there are others that away and need to be guided with kidneys and hearts and livers in corneas of sight the pancreas is skin graph to all who wait and sorry dead of night 4 the gift of life for the unfortunate circumstance because feet maybe your date but Miss destiny will never be late and she has the final say that's all I have to say nice piece here Ricky 10:24
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your most detailed and encouraging review.
Comment from Sambangi
Cancer is a deadly disease for anyone. Adults (some) may get it by life style they live. But it is very heartening and painful when a child gets it. You have chosen a very good subject for this contest and narrated well. Best of luck
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Cancer is a deadly disease for anyone. Adults (some) may get it by life style they live. But it is very heartening and painful when a child gets it. You have chosen a very good subject for this contest and narrated well. Best of luck
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your most encouraging revierw