Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Congrats on your well-deserved win! A THIRD TIME!

Good entry for the contest...true to form and well rhymed. I especially like the rhyme of screaming and scheming...as it shares alliteration and consonance in front sounds as well as end sounds.

Fine personification.
Superb fierce pacing too!


Namaste, rd

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015

Thanks for the third, awesome review, dear friend. I also liked the pair of screaming and scheming. ;)

Glad to know you enjoyed the musicality in all the three poems. You just made my day. :)

Namaste,
Anupam

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi The Death comgratulations on you duel win with Barbara for you well written tyburn. Although only three of us in the competition it is always fun to try these genre,s so well done Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Hi Christine! Thanks for reading and your congratulatory note. It was fun trying this form. Have a great day.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

This is a very good Tyburn poem. I enjoyed reading it. The thought of the moon screaming (good personification) and not being heard because the human is scheming lies tells a little story.

Good luck in the contest.

:) e

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, e. So glad you enjoyed this. :)

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I'm not qualified to rate this on this unfamiliar style but only on the delivery of emotion or grip of the presentation, which I consider very good given the short constraints obviously mandated by the style. Good Work: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Vance. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Well written poetry in six lines a whole story is told. The full moon is beaming silver light and someone wake up screaming from a nightmare, but no one hears.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sandra. I'm pleased you liked this one.

Comment from SilentNinja2930

Excellent

This is an interesting poem about the moon. I never thought about the moon like this before. I guess howling at the moon is kind of the same thing as screaming. I like seeing different people's perspectives of nature. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, SN. Yes, it's always a delight reading others' POV. I'm glad you enjoyed this.