Comment from LanceHill

Excellent

Very nicely written. From what I saw described it met the requirements. It was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015

thank you Lance for reading and reviewing this Tyburn it was a bit of fun to write Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,
It looks like you did a good job with the syllable count. This is very good and your first try. I like the Halloween theme, very appropriate. I love wolverine.
Gypsy

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thanks GypsyBlue for you positive review and when I thought of Halloween the Wolverine came up so mixed the two together. Having fun with the style Cheers

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
I do believe you have written a very good Tyburn poem for the contest.

Halloween prowls Tricking Treating teens
Wolverine howls Wreaking Piercing screams

I wish you the very best of luck, Mary

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thank you Mary for your great review and encouraging words for my Tyburn entry. this is a new genre for me so thought I would have a go and the wolverine just sprang out lol Cheers Christine

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

This is a pretty tricky format which you've covered beautifully. Your theme is current, the elements appropriate and your use of language terrific. I thought the escalating of Halloween horrors from 'Halloween prowls' to the even more tormenting 'Wolverine howls' worked very effectively. Best of luck with this comp.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015

Thank you mfowler very much for your very encouraging review I hope it did work and yes it is a tricky format but I like to have a try at different genres and I have had some great feedback so hopefully on the right track. Glad you like this one Many thanks again Cheers

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Wow! This poem moves with speed. All those 'ing' words makes this really come alive. Like the structure of this which is a part of tyburn poetry. Your author notes helped me see it clearly. Wonderfully written. Les

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thanls Les for stopping by to have a read and give me a great review .A first timer for this and who know maybe I will celebrate Halloween too first time lol Cheers

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Hi Les, Thanks for stopping by to have a read and for your great review for my firstctime attempt at tyburn . may even celebrate Halloween first time too lol. Cheers ( sorry if you have already received this reply sometimes I'm not sure if they get sent )

Comment from LeslieP5

Excellent

Very well done. I didn't quite understand the requirements of the 5-8th syllables but your fun Halloween poem has clarified that for me. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Hi LeslieP5 .thanks for reading and reviewing this poem or tyburn ( I hadn't heard of this style until I came across the contest and did a little reasearch and as Halloween is next week thought I would try one so appreciate your comments and good luck wishes Cheers

reply by LeslieP5 on 25-Oct-2015

You're welcome. You did a really good job.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job with the prompt. The artwork and words create a good poem. The syllable count is correct. Good job with that aspect.

Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thanks you jannypan for javing a read and giving this poem a great review and thanks for your best wishes Cheers

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

What a wonderfully joyous occasion Halloween really is. All the monsters come out to play. Well written poem that uses terms such as "tricking," and "treating," to better illustrate the fun of the night. Should also be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thanks Brett for your review and encouraging comments for this contest. I appreciate you great feedback and hope you have fun in Halloween celebrations Cheers

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This is a super cool Tyburn poem, Anonymous Poet, although I think I know who you are based on the comments in your author's notes.
You don't know what you're missing by not celebrating, by the way. But..it's your choice, as well as your loss. That just means there will be more candy for the rest of us...Yipee!!!, lol.

Anyhow, it doesn't really matter to me whether you celebrate Halloween, or you don't--that's really irrelevant here. What is relevant, however, is that you managed to follow the example, the rules, and create an well written, wonderfully presented Tyburn poem.

You did that wonderfully.

Good luck in the booth...

~Dean

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Hi Dean I need ro look after my teeth , but chocolate doesn't count lol. Thanks for your great review and encouraging words to my Tyburn ability I enjoyed having a go and as Hallowwen is so close for many what better subject to try out. I hope your have a great Halloween celebration Cheers

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Oct-2015

Thanks, and you are more than welcome.
Again, best of luck!

~Dean :}

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

As far as I can see it has the correct syllable count. For a first attempt at this genre I think you have made a very solid attempt. Its subject matter is perfectly described and very descriptive. Well done on this imaginative and creative write.

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thanks PoemsOfDD for your review and great comments for my first attempt at this genre I am not sure if all the words rhyme so may need a tweek if it does not meet requirement but I really appreciate your support I wil have to wait and see ,Just a bit of fun having a go anyway Cheers

reply by PoemsOfDD on 25-Oct-2015

Unless it is specified a must for rhyme I don't think you have much to worry about. :-)

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thanks I will wait and see. Many thanks Cheers

reply by PoemsOfDD on 25-Oct-2015

Sorry, just read it again. I should have picked up on it in the first place as it should rhyme. Perhaps change the second to last word to 'themes' to rhyme with 'screams' of the last word on the last line. Food for thought. DD