The Quest
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Comment from abbasjoy
Wow! Is all I can muster at this point. What a welcome. I can only imagine how you stood open mouthed catching flies, when you realized that your mother knew who you were and was actually welcoming you into her home.
This is surely more than you had ever hoped for. I gathered that by the mumbo jumbo you presented her with when she opened the door:)
I just love this story. It's very naturally written and sad in a way, yet quite remarkable. I am so happy for you.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Wow! Is all I can muster at this point. What a welcome. I can only imagine how you stood open mouthed catching flies, when you realized that your mother knew who you were and was actually welcoming you into her home.
This is surely more than you had ever hoped for. I gathered that by the mumbo jumbo you presented her with when she opened the door:)
I just love this story. It's very naturally written and sad in a way, yet quite remarkable. I am so happy for you.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Oh thank you so much. I'm so pleased that you enjoy my story. Thanks for your awesome six stars. It means so much to me. All the best. Ulla.
Comment from barkingdog
After the extensive search, you found your mother, and she was pleased to see you. She asked you to give up your motel and stay with her. Then you two sat down to wine and a meal.
I didn't feel the emotion that I expected. Maybe, more dialogue a genuine hug--any way after such a search, it all seemed very mechanical/formal and organizational( a moment in the house/situating motel vs her house, wine/ a meal.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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After the extensive search, you found your mother, and she was pleased to see you. She asked you to give up your motel and stay with her. Then you two sat down to wine and a meal.
I didn't feel the emotion that I expected. Maybe, more dialogue a genuine hug--any way after such a search, it all seemed very mechanical/formal and organizational( a moment in the house/situating motel vs her house, wine/ a meal.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Well, first, thanks for the review. I see what you are saying but after 51 years of neither of us ever seeing nor knowing each other the whole situation is awkward. You just don't fall into each others arms. It's just not that simple. But if you read between the lines a lot is going on emotionally. If you read on as I hope you will, much more will be revealed. All best, Ulla
Comment from Unspoken94
It's amazing that all of this is a part of your life. This is a wonderful chapter and I hope I can keep up with chapters to come. What a wonderful way to end this chapter, the mother asking for forgiveness. -Bill
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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It's amazing that all of this is a part of your life. This is a wonderful chapter and I hope I can keep up with chapters to come. What a wonderful way to end this chapter, the mother asking for forgiveness. -Bill
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Ulla
Comment from Eric1
Hi Ulla, your latest story has really made me happy.As you know I have followed your wonderful story from day one, through your ups and downs your tears and laughter, but this was the episode that I was hoping to read my friend, I am overjoyed for you!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hi Ulla, your latest story has really made me happy.As you know I have followed your wonderful story from day one, through your ups and downs your tears and laughter, but this was the episode that I was hoping to read my friend, I am overjoyed for you!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Oh Eric, thank you so much. I am thrilled that you enjoy it. There is more to come. It's not over yet. Thanks again. All best. Ulla
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Millibrad
What a wonderful and well written story. I'm not familiar with the story leading up to this point, but this part can certainly stand alone. I look forward to reading more of this encounter. I found no problems.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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What a wonderful and well written story. I'm not familiar with the story leading up to this point, but this part can certainly stand alone. I look forward to reading more of this encounter. I found no problems.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for you lovely review, and I do hope you'll read on. Ulla
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent chapter, ulla, I am so glad you're writing about your journey of discovering your mother. I am so glad she was so willing to accept you into her life again. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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this is an excellent chapter, ulla, I am so glad you're writing about your journey of discovering your mother. I am so glad she was so willing to accept you into her life again. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. More is to come. All best. Ulla
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, this is great. An intense story about meeting your mother. You walk the reader through your fears and trepidation. The is very visual. I can also see it. The closing line is a stunner, "Can you ever forgive me?" I thought about relatives who gave up babies for adoption but have yet to be visited by the grown child they gave away. Thank you for sharing your life and your writing.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Wow, this is great. An intense story about meeting your mother. You walk the reader through your fears and trepidation. The is very visual. I can also see it. The closing line is a stunner, "Can you ever forgive me?" I thought about relatives who gave up babies for adoption but have yet to be visited by the grown child they gave away. Thank you for sharing your life and your writing.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much Sis Cat, I am so pleased that you like it and more is to follow. Thanks again. Ulla
Comment from Serendipity!
This is one of those 'almost too good to be true' types of stories. Isn't it wonderful how you hit it off right from the beginning? I do wonder about the story behind the story: what will come out to bridge all those missing years.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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This is one of those 'almost too good to be true' types of stories. Isn't it wonderful how you hit it off right from the beginning? I do wonder about the story behind the story: what will come out to bridge all those missing years.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much. You are right, there is a story behind the story. More to follow. Thanks again, Ulla
Comment from c_lucas
Not all reunions are that happy. I know of one where a man was adopted at birth and lived as an only child. He found his birth siblings who were not very happy to see him. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Not all reunions are that happy. I know of one where a man was adopted at birth and lived as an only child. He found his birth siblings who were not very happy to see him. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much. Yes I was lucky that I was not turned away. More to come soon. Ulla
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You're welcome, Ulla. Charlie
Comment from Curly Girly
Oh, well, that's a good start. I am relieved to hear that she was at home, and that she was so welcoming to you. It was helpful that you looked similar, not all mothers do. I am sure you will forgive her, that is why you are there, and to find out a bit more.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Oh, well, that's a good start. I am relieved to hear that she was at home, and that she was so welcoming to you. It was helpful that you looked similar, not all mothers do. I am sure you will forgive her, that is why you are there, and to find out a bit more.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much, more is soon to come. All best, Ulla
