Act of Endurance
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Comment from Nika2016
At first, I thought the translator had broken...LOL...and then I realized the unique form of poetry is a form of enjambment that is brilliant in its simplicity and complexity. Simon, the Storyteller grips minds with tales of his endeavors..taking justice into his own hands..never a good idea...
The poem, like Simon...shocks the reader.
Brilliantly interesting.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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At first, I thought the translator had broken...LOL...and then I realized the unique form of poetry is a form of enjambment that is brilliant in its simplicity and complexity. Simon, the Storyteller grips minds with tales of his endeavors..taking justice into his own hands..never a good idea...
The poem, like Simon...shocks the reader.
Brilliantly interesting.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Non grammatic English: wow what a thought. I am learning slowly others spoken words. They say there is a time for all things. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Ricky1024
Adjective Content was wonderful as well as Objective Content and based on theme as well as Objective Content and based on theme as well as Imagery and in a scale of one to one hundred...
A 100.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Adjective Content was wonderful as well as Objective Content and based on theme as well as Objective Content and based on theme as well as Imagery and in a scale of one to one hundred...
A 100.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Wow. I assumed ranged you bell. If right, glad you found interests un this pit. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating conveyances.
Comment from Joyce Long
I can't agree that Simon, a story teller, and a story writer are the same thing. We each tell a story, but writing a paper on paper is not as difficult as telling a convincing story and keeping an audience listening. I took a story telling class at college--that was difficult. I am not a story teller. I am a story writer as I am working on my tenth book.
Very well done.
Joyce 111-16-15
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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I can't agree that Simon, a story teller, and a story writer are the same thing. We each tell a story, but writing a paper on paper is not as difficult as telling a convincing story and keeping an audience listening. I took a story telling class at college--that was difficult. I am not a story teller. I am a story writer as I am working on my tenth book.
Very well done.
Joyce 111-16-15
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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That's fantastic about your accomplishment, I will take your words on the writer and teller aspect of the story. I didn't see a difference between. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed insights.
Comment from MaBaker
Hi TPAC. I hope I've got that correct? Anyway. As I don't write poetry I can only judge on what I like. I think I am coming in a few chapters which makes it difficult. I don't know Simon. Pity, I think I would like him. The artwork is very lifelike. I liked my brief encounter with Simon. Regards MaBaker.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Hi TPAC. I hope I've got that correct? Anyway. As I don't write poetry I can only judge on what I like. I think I am coming in a few chapters which makes it difficult. I don't know Simon. Pity, I think I would like him. The artwork is very lifelike. I liked my brief encounter with Simon. Regards MaBaker.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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I fear I have mislead you somewhat with the thought of chapters, the poem itself is the chapter. Glad this work in your view was found pleasing. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed insights about this write.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC
How clever you are in your notes saying us writers on Fanstory are the writer of tales. Hope they are of truth or reality sorrow an dreams
not like Simon personal lies.
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Hello TPAC
How clever you are in your notes saying us writers on Fanstory are the writer of tales. Hope they are of truth or reality sorrow an dreams
not like Simon personal lies.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Yeah. Glad this work found appeal with you. Thanking you for generous rate and charming thoughts.
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You are welcome TPAC
Gert
Comment from TallySally
Tpac, you're cookon' now! You let her rip with this one and, wow! You had this white-lady word-for-word with you. Guess you're teaching me a new language - YOUR LANGUAGE IN YOUR VOICE.
I'm so glad to read this.
Some lines that caught my heart:
The 'blow to blow' verse .. Really great.
The 'Terrors to make one hold ones face' such a clever twist of meaning and humor.
And the third verse from last. No way to say it better.
It would be a six, my friend if I any left. They cut me off a few days ago.
Let her rip.
Relda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Tpac, you're cookon' now! You let her rip with this one and, wow! You had this white-lady word-for-word with you. Guess you're teaching me a new language - YOUR LANGUAGE IN YOUR VOICE.
I'm so glad to read this.
Some lines that caught my heart:
The 'blow to blow' verse .. Really great.
The 'Terrors to make one hold ones face' such a clever twist of meaning and humor.
And the third verse from last. No way to say it better.
It would be a six, my friend if I any left. They cut me off a few days ago.
Let her rip.
Relda
Comment Written 24-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Hope you get back up. Glad this write delighted you so. Thanking you for generous rate and encouragement.
Comment from gamay
Hello TPAC.
This very nice poem.
I missed the chapter but I really liked it.
Its easy to read.
Have a nice day to you.
gamay
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Hello TPAC.
This very nice poem.
I missed the chapter but I really liked it.
Its easy to read.
Have a nice day to you.
gamay
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thought this work an aim to define the writer experience as a storyteller. Glad its read was smooth and with your rock firm statements I feel assured of intent. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed encouragement.
