Our Love
Song lyrics16 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Bravo for this one. I'll have to look up your other half. Was great to see you. I haven't written for a year or so now. So many things going on. Happy my dear sweet friend for your new found love. It looks great on you! xoxo sending huggs deborah aka Kiwi :)
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Bravo for this one. I'll have to look up your other half. Was great to see you. I haven't written for a year or so now. So many things going on. Happy my dear sweet friend for your new found love. It looks great on you! xoxo sending huggs deborah aka Kiwi :)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much! Hope all is well!
Look me up on Facebook.
Jewell McChesney
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
That's beautiful. You know we miss you, right? How did the wedding go? You must tell us all the beautiful details. Love your song, do you have it to music?
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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That's beautiful. You know we miss you, right? How did the wedding go? You must tell us all the beautiful details. Love your song, do you have it to music?
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks JoLynn.
All went beautifully! Living our dream!
Comment from melyuki
Hi Jewel, what an awesome Love song.. I can feel your heart brimming full of love through your words and wow.. how fantastic. Your poetry flows superbly and the rhyming is grand. The story in your verse is fuelled by happiness and that emotion drives the reader through with excitement and delight. thanks for sharing and congrats to you and Graceheart. happy hugs from mel xxx
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi Jewel, what an awesome Love song.. I can feel your heart brimming full of love through your words and wow.. how fantastic. Your poetry flows superbly and the rhyming is grand. The story in your verse is fuelled by happiness and that emotion drives the reader through with excitement and delight. thanks for sharing and congrats to you and Graceheart. happy hugs from mel xxx
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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Hi!! Thank you so much. We were married in Leap Day. I kinda like that udea. Leaping into a beautiful future!
Comment from Ronni
JJ,
Halleluia! Angels sigh, heavens happily implore..
Jewell has found her blessed Amour!
Congrats, good luck, and may Divine's Grace
and blessings be with you always! Ronni
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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JJ,
Halleluia! Angels sigh, heavens happily implore..
Jewell has found her blessed Amour!
Congrats, good luck, and may Divine's Grace
and blessings be with you always! Ronni
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Thanks old friend!
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend Jewell. This was a beautifully written love poem, I so enjoyed. I see you have finally found Mr. Right? My best to you, Loyd
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hello poet friend Jewell. This was a beautifully written love poem, I so enjoyed. I see you have finally found Mr. Right? My best to you, Loyd
Comment Written 03-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Yes! Finally
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That's very nice, I am happy for you. Loyd
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That's very nice, I am happy for you. Loyd
Comment from Diny
JJ I am overjoyed that you have found the soulmate you have always deserved and wish for you nothing less than happiness daily forever. You will always have a place in my heart as a writer and friend and artist- bless you dear one and as always Write on- Di
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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JJ I am overjoyed that you have found the soulmate you have always deserved and wish for you nothing less than happiness daily forever. You will always have a place in my heart as a writer and friend and artist- bless you dear one and as always Write on- Di
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thanks, my lovely friend!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about love. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I was talking to my sister in law as I reviewer your poem. She loved it also. Great job. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about love. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I was talking to my sister in law as I reviewer your poem. She loved it also. Great job. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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thank you Teri
Comment from NadineM
Jewell, this is beautiful. It tells the story of how you two came to be. I mean, all those other romantic but sad poems of longing were the prelude... I am glad the chorus is now sung with passion and certainty! Your love was a long time coming, but God's gifts are worth waiting for!! And now whole, you two can begin a new chapter! Congratulations and always, best wishes!! God bless.
Thanks for sharing this with me! (should've posted an audio recording of the two of you singing!!)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Jewell, this is beautiful. It tells the story of how you two came to be. I mean, all those other romantic but sad poems of longing were the prelude... I am glad the chorus is now sung with passion and certainty! Your love was a long time coming, but God's gifts are worth waiting for!! And now whole, you two can begin a new chapter! Congratulations and always, best wishes!! God bless.
Thanks for sharing this with me! (should've posted an audio recording of the two of you singing!!)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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If I can figure out how to do audio recordings for this, we will!
Thanks for reviewing, Nadine
Comment from TallySally
The concept is intriguing. Not half+half=whole, but whole+whole+God=perfect love.
I read your piece out loud and found it pretty smooth. The choice of words was good, as was the rhyming. The phrasing, admittedly subjective, seemed a little forced a few times.
A worthy work.
Good luck with this.
Blessings,
Relda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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The concept is intriguing. Not half+half=whole, but whole+whole+God=perfect love.
I read your piece out loud and found it pretty smooth. The choice of words was good, as was the rhyming. The phrasing, admittedly subjective, seemed a little forced a few times.
A worthy work.
Good luck with this.
Blessings,
Relda
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your comments
Comment from chelsiechristine
This is a really lovely poem. It is a great depiction about how two whole people come together with God to find a great and true love.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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This is a really lovely poem. It is a great depiction about how two whole people come together with God to find a great and true love.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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Thank you
