A Lady Shutterbug's Dream
Limerick 8,8,6,6,812 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
LOL I like your limerick, it is funny. I like to meet that man too LOL
I like the picture and color theme. The rhyme and the meter are good.
Good job!
gypsy
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Hello :)
LOL I like your limerick, it is funny. I like to meet that man too LOL
I like the picture and color theme. The rhyme and the meter are good.
Good job!
gypsy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
Comment from Janet Foor
A true to form, bawdy limerick. Great picture to "enhance" your clever words. Great imagery, great fun. Very well done and good luck in the contest.
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A true to form, bawdy limerick. Great picture to "enhance" your clever words. Great imagery, great fun. Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
Comment from Bill Schott
This limerick, A Lady Shutterbug's Dream, is pretty funny and leans toward the bawdy as well. The meter is okay and rhyme is right on.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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This limerick, A Lady Shutterbug's Dream, is pretty funny and leans toward the bawdy as well. The meter is okay and rhyme is right on.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you kindly. Glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mikey
Funny and bawdy to say the least. lol I'm sure the photographer was amused. :)
Syllable count spot on, meter reads fine to me in limerick style. Great presentation and rhyme. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
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Hi Mikey
Funny and bawdy to say the least. lol I'm sure the photographer was amused. :)
Syllable count spot on, meter reads fine to me in limerick style. Great presentation and rhyme. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from RYME4U
This is a clever and original limerick. It meaets the correct rhyme pattern and is bawdy, too. You have done a great job with this contest entry,
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This is a clever and original limerick. It meaets the correct rhyme pattern and is bawdy, too. You have done a great job with this contest entry,
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Well done on this limerick writing prompt entry. It has good flow and is nicely descriptive allowing the reader to get a vivid picture - oh my! It brought a smile to my face...your limerick that is, not my imagination :-) Well done for the amusing read and good luck in the competition.
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Well done on this limerick writing prompt entry. It has good flow and is nicely descriptive allowing the reader to get a vivid picture - oh my! It brought a smile to my face...your limerick that is, not my imagination :-) Well done for the amusing read and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
If this is to be judged bt laughter, then this is a runaway winner. Sharp, clear, witty and hilarious. The six is for the great start to my day. Thank you!!!
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If this is to be judged bt laughter, then this is a runaway winner. Sharp, clear, witty and hilarious. The six is for the great start to my day. Thank you!!!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from fluffnstuff
That is the funniest one i have read yet to this day!!!!what a hoot and a half this one is. best of luck in the contest fluff
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That is the funniest one i have read yet to this day!!!!what a hoot and a half this one is. best of luck in the contest fluff
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent limerick in the best traditional bawdy style - without being gross or offensive, IMO.
To be really nit-pick (one of my many faults, LOL), I found the 4th line's meter to be out, as I emphasise as, 'TRI-pod', but that's no big deal.
Perfect rhymes, as required in limericks.
Main ingredient works great - the humour, conveyed with top imagery.
Excellent.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
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Excellent limerick in the best traditional bawdy style - without being gross or offensive, IMO.
To be really nit-pick (one of my many faults, LOL), I found the 4th line's meter to be out, as I emphasise as, 'TRI-pod', but that's no big deal.
Perfect rhymes, as required in limericks.
Main ingredient works great - the humour, conveyed with top imagery.
Excellent.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
Comment from mfowler
You're poem reads well enough from the page. It employees the traditional Irish bawdiness in its delivery and there's a giggle to be had by all readers on finishing. You're naked man with the voluminous appendage is said to be a 'human tripod'. Now, there's a thought. No wonder the young lassie's so keen. Fun entry and I wish you well.
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You're poem reads well enough from the page. It employees the traditional Irish bawdiness in its delivery and there's a giggle to be had by all readers on finishing. You're naked man with the voluminous appendage is said to be a 'human tripod'. Now, there's a thought. No wonder the young lassie's so keen. Fun entry and I wish you well.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
