Act of Endurance
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Comment from royowen
Like you, I am horrified at the level of evil in the worl today, which goes beyond the pail. Beautifully written in Prost of the evil abroad in the world today my friend. Good job, written in triplets in praise of God, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Like you, I am horrified at the level of evil in the worl today, which goes beyond the pail. Beautifully written in Prost of the evil abroad in the world today my friend. Good job, written in triplets in praise of God, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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These thoughts from you, as your others pertained to my writes, are always a welcomed treat for me. I like your inspiring writes. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the attitude and faith in evil doings, the evil doers have no faith in God, they keep activating evils freely; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This speaks the attitude and faith in evil doings, the evil doers have no faith in God, they keep activating evils freely; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Family. What can you say? Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views about this write.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello TPAC,
I like the use of TEETER and TOTTER. Together they mass your statements at two ends of the pendulum.
An interesting look into a world that appears to be going 'to hell in a handbasket'.
Until next time.
Sonali
rulers(') injustice to poor
I('ve) seen a contrast
people('s) lives in mud, an applied teeter: GOD see(s)
In response drought dr(ies) up regions
God's (anger) upon them
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Hello TPAC,
I like the use of TEETER and TOTTER. Together they mass your statements at two ends of the pendulum.
An interesting look into a world that appears to be going 'to hell in a handbasket'.
Until next time.
Sonali
rulers(') injustice to poor
I('ve) seen a contrast
people('s) lives in mud, an applied teeter: GOD see(s)
In response drought dr(ies) up regions
God's (anger) upon them
Comment Written 27-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Good shout! Appreciate insights will revise. Thanking you for your interests and generous rate.
Comment from create4christ
I love the picture you have chosen. It works well with you teeter-totter poem. I agree with you that men who say THERE IS NO GOD, are fools. One day, when we ALL stand before that Great White Throne, they will understand. Great poem.
Thank you for sharing, my friend. ..Penny
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I love the picture you have chosen. It works well with you teeter-totter poem. I agree with you that men who say THERE IS NO GOD, are fools. One day, when we ALL stand before that Great White Throne, they will understand. Great poem.
Thank you for sharing, my friend. ..Penny
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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The whole world is deceived taught lies as truth: those denying God sentencing of themselves outside His kingdom. Glad certain aspects were found pleasing and held interests. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from c_lucas
To deny God is to deny yourself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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To deny God is to deny yourself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Appreciate your input upon this write, most my writes yielded with pits: I don't sense their dismay in your read. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating conveyances.
Comment from onceinabluemoon
An interesting metaphor. Certainly, an age-old question of social injustice, and a higher power's role. The results of that gift to man, totter to his teeter, to grant free will, then live by its consequences.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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An interesting metaphor. Certainly, an age-old question of social injustice, and a higher power's role. The results of that gift to man, totter to his teeter, to grant free will, then live by its consequences.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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I'm pleased the intented write was received and well declared in your statements: thanking you for generous rate despite those flaws.
Comment from Pyrrho
You create a god that created man; a god that is all powerful. Then you attribute anger to the god who then causes evil. if there is an all powerful god and there is also evil, then that god either wants the evil to exist or doesn't give a shit about it.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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You create a god that created man; a god that is all powerful. Then you attribute anger to the god who then causes evil. if there is an all powerful god and there is also evil, then that god either wants the evil to exist or doesn't give a shit about it.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Not really, God doesn't give a wink about our childish antics; the lake of fire is a warning to all realms called heaven. I like Pop makes me smile: totally captivated by my brother and Spirit of God - called Jesus. Thanking you for warm thoughts and kind rate.
Comment from Wabigoon
TPAC--
Part of me likes this, part not. I like its frankness, that's it's probably vision, and real for you. I believe it is real. I don't necessarily believe in its source. Revelation-style visions...why not set a sword of power down somewhere in it and declare "Stop, it's over! You are, this is banished in favor of a different vision." I believe it would be more courageous to do so that to accept "God's" Judgment one way or other.
Here's a problem:
I see in a teeter blazing enormous fires people fleeing, waters raging over towns to equal cruelties we apply, GOD beholding warmonger()s acts. -- apostrophe
Oh, somewhere in here there's a raghng for raging as well but can't find it. Minor, doesn't affect my "score."
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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TPAC--
Part of me likes this, part not. I like its frankness, that's it's probably vision, and real for you. I believe it is real. I don't necessarily believe in its source. Revelation-style visions...why not set a sword of power down somewhere in it and declare "Stop, it's over! You are, this is banished in favor of a different vision." I believe it would be more courageous to do so that to accept "God's" Judgment one way or other.
Here's a problem:
I see in a teeter blazing enormous fires people fleeing, waters raging over towns to equal cruelties we apply, GOD beholding warmonger()s acts. -- apostrophe
Oh, somewhere in here there's a raghng for raging as well but can't find it. Minor, doesn't affect my "score."
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Most of my works hold these pits and through revising of them lesser effects on them once cleared. The write seemed to place you at odds, which made me think you did consider these statements. Thinking about probablities as if was the effort intended for this write. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed comments about this composition.
Comment from Joyce Long
Very well done.
I do believe that all the evil that we behold is the preparing us for the coming of the Lord. Why he is allowing so much evil, I can't explain, but read in the Bible that hard, evil times are coming just before the Lord's return.
I have the promise that He is returning. I am anxiously awaiting that time.
Your have done a nice job with this.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-15-15
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Very well done.
I do believe that all the evil that we behold is the preparing us for the coming of the Lord. Why he is allowing so much evil, I can't explain, but read in the Bible that hard, evil times are coming just before the Lord's return.
I have the promise that He is returning. I am anxiously awaiting that time.
Your have done a nice job with this.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-15-15
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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We forget in the beginning God gave us rule over this world, our world's host constantly blame God for our world's happenings when it is us. Don't have to wait for evil it was before the creation our existence details the final straw and a return back to throne ruling. Or as Jesus states, setting the captives free. Thanking you for generous rate and inspiring thoughts about this write.
Comment from lancellot
This is a bit hard on the ease of reading scale. I get the writer is upset over atrocities in the world now, but when in all human history was there not war, death and dishonesty?
note:
When will we think plus know to equal learn.
Not sure what this last line meant.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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This is a bit hard on the ease of reading scale. I get the writer is upset over atrocities in the world now, but when in all human history was there not war, death and dishonesty?
note:
When will we think plus know to equal learn.
Not sure what this last line meant.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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The last line is an equation of a formula. Dispute reading ease I am glad you found interest. War has not always existed although the other aspects have. Check prior to tlood - there exist no nations. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed comments.
