Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello AnnieDawn
I like the way you write your poetry thoughts with such ease and make your words flow so nice

How did you do in the contest.

Gert

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review and comments. I think I tied for third place on this one if I remember correctly.

reply by Gert sherwood on 31-Oct-2015

To me that would be real ood

Gert

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

hello annie

what a beautiful entry
I love the moment in time
you grace us with peace and tranquility
not to mention much imagery
the format is in true form
you did meet the challenge
all is well within the entry

thank you for sharing your talent
ann marie

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015

I thank you so much for your review and comments. It makes me happy to have someone enjoy what I have written.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

"And so the day begins for you...While once again you watch anew....The sun which dries the morning dew"

This short contest poem describes that wonderful feeling and the new day with its fresh start. Beautiful picture and the colors compliment the message.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review and that is exactly how my morning is described. Only thing missing is put a cup of coffee in my hand..lol

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Very well done and I really enjoy your artwork (even though I've always been a sucker for frost bitten fields). Very nice!!!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for your review. If you look real closely at the field I am not so sure but what that is really snow on it. Anyway it looked like frost so I used it for frost.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

There are few entries in this contest that I've read so far that don't sound forced or contrived. This is one of the good ones. Much luck to you!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my poem. Your comments are appreciated also.

Comment from Roskow

Needs Improvement

Yikes! I guess it just seems all over the place. It takes a beautiful sunrise and turns it into something drab. It leaves you hanging. I know conveying a triple eight is difficult but this writer missed the mark. It does not complete a vision at all.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

I thank you for participating in the review of my poem. I know that not all writings will please everyone and I am disappointed that it had such a negative effect on you. I do thank you for your time.

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

Your poem satisfies the requirements for the contest and for that reason alone you should have a 5! Being an early riser before dawn, I find the dawn to be a sacred moment. Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. I will be voting. -Bill

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my poem. Your comments are appreciated also.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Each new day holds a special promise all its own, as this well written poem so clearly depicts. Should also be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review and kind comments. I have so many nature writings but they just don't seem to fit the contests so have to create something new each time as I don't want to take my others apart.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

And so the day begins for you
It so does and for me too..
Watching the sun would burn our retinas but I do understand the poetic need to ..well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review and kind comments. I have so many nature writings but they just don't seem to fit the contests so have to create something new each time as I don't want to take my others apart.