Christine's Poems
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Comment from Eric1
Hi Christine, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition,Happy birthday and there is nothing wrong with a bit of self indulgence on your special day! I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
Hi Christine, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition,Happy birthday and there is nothing wrong with a bit of self indulgence on your special day! I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Hi Eric thanks so much for your great comments for my indulgent poem lol. Couldn't resist the chellange and I had a lovely birthday this year and some beautiful responses from FS friends so really appreciate you wishes Cheers Christine😃
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You are so welcome my friend.
Comment from LeslieP5
Congratulations on your 5-7-5 birthday poem and entry. The picture is priceless. Stay young at heart - and I see you are! Many more and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
Congratulations on your 5-7-5 birthday poem and entry. The picture is priceless. Stay young at heart - and I see you are! Many more and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Hi LeslieP5 thanks for stopping by to have a read and share my birthday with me I have had such fun with this and some lovely responses so it was certainly. worth the 5-7-5 for this year. Win lose or draw I feel so lucky to have such a great FS support so a big Cheers to you Christine . PS Do I have to get old yet ? lol Naaa😀
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My pleasure. Age is just a state of mind and my mind, lie yours, prefers to stay young. at heart.
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Yes it is, being young at heart is fun
Comment from ravenblack
Happy birthday! I'll pretend I have dyslexia and with you a happy 36! I wish that would work for me. Well, it could if I were approaching a second childhood lol. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
Happy birthday! I'll pretend I have dyslexia and with you a happy 36! I wish that would work for me. Well, it could if I were approaching a second childhood lol. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Thanks ravenback for your wishes for a 36 ( if only ha ha) No all good and I love to have fun on my birthday although the photo was taken in february this year so still within of reach 63 secomd childhood Don't think I have left the first one yet lol So thanks for your support and great wishes Cheers Christine😃
Comment from mermaids
Happy Birthday and what a great way to add to your birthday celebrations by creating a birthday poem. Excellent 5-7-5 form that gives a happy feeling. Indulge your self today.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
Happy Birthday and what a great way to add to your birthday celebrations by creating a birthday poem. Excellent 5-7-5 form that gives a happy feeling. Indulge your self today.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Thank you mermaids for a lovely review and birthday wishes and glad you like my 5-7-5 I thought it a bit of fun and I have reaped the benefits from such a lovely response from the beautiful FS reviewers so appreciate you good wishes Cheers to you Christine 😃
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I love the youthfulness of this picture and poem. Your vitality shows in both the illustration and words of your work.
I wonder why you put 'sixty three' in quotations? Is that a fictitious age?
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing it!
~Donna
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
I love the youthfulness of this picture and poem. Your vitality shows in both the illustration and words of your work.
I wonder why you put 'sixty three' in quotations? Is that a fictitious age?
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing it!
~Donna
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Hi Donna , I try to retain a little bit of youth and No 63 is my real age ! so I guess I was just highlighting it with the quotations . but so glad you enjoyed my poem and so appreciative of your lovely review. so A big Cheers christine😀
Comment from Glasstruth
Congrats! Birthday's are mostly wonderful expect for that added year we add on. Well done. Good luck with the contest. Les
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
Congrats! Birthday's are mostly wonderful expect for that added year we add on. Well done. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you Les for reading my poem and for your lovely comments and good luck. This year I thought i would share it with my FS friends as well and what a lovely response from many so thanks again. Cheers Christine😃.
Comment from Nosha17
Lovely picture, Christine, why should you not celebrate it in a poem. Like you said, some may not be so lucky, I feel lucky to be happy in my retirement. Have a lovely day, well chosen words and message. Good luck in the contest. faye
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
Lovely picture, Christine, why should you not celebrate it in a poem. Like you said, some may not be so lucky, I feel lucky to be happy in my retirement. Have a lovely day, well chosen words and message. Good luck in the contest. faye
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Hi Faye, Thanks so much for your review and lovely thoughts for my birthday celebrations I had a great day and have received some beautiful wishes from FS friends too, so I am so pleased . Yes I think we are lucky to be able to write and correspond as we do and I have enjoyed this site so much meeting all the writers and reading wonderful work such as yours also. I had a lovely birthday this year. Still working may retire when I'm 65. With Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from honeytree
Loved the art work for this poem
that is great to read in every way
It is great to celebrate ones birthday
in life, our birthday comes around each
and every year and what a fun time it can be.
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
Loved the art work for this poem
that is great to read in every way
It is great to celebrate ones birthday
in life, our birthday comes around each
and every year and what a fun time it can be.
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much Honey tree for you lovely review and comments. and yes I did celebrate it with my friends and family and thought my photo was probably fitting for my age lol. Glad you liked my poem so thanks again Cheers to you Christine😃
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I did and good luck to you
Honey tree
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Thanks 😃
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I did and good luck to you
Honey tree
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I did and good luck to you
Honey tree
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Happy birthday to you, mama. I join you in this celebration. Have great fun with friends and family. You are still so young, you still have a long race to run. God bless your days.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
Happy birthday to you, mama. I join you in this celebration. Have great fun with friends and family. You are still so young, you still have a long race to run. God bless your days.
ola thomas
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you Ola for your lovely birthday wishes and review . it is always good to enjoy this special day which is
I did and your lovely comment add to this occasion. I hope I have a long race to run my aim is at least 100 lol. With Cheers to you Christine 63 yrs young 😃
Comment from pharp
Great 5-7-5 poem my dear, Happy belated birthday, I pray you had a wonderful day. It appears that you had a great day, I love the picture, having fun riding on the horse. You look so young, keep doing what you are doing. Blessings......................Portia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
Great 5-7-5 poem my dear, Happy belated birthday, I pray you had a wonderful day. It appears that you had a great day, I love the picture, having fun riding on the horse. You look so young, keep doing what you are doing. Blessings......................Portia
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank Portia for your sweet wishes and prayers for my birthday . I di have a lovely day and trying to hang onto my little bit of Youth lol A big thanks and Cheers to you my friend Christine😄