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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

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Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!

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Comment from c_lucas
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I lost out here when you stayed at a woman's lodging. I thought Shirley was making the trip. You went back to the masculine point of view and everything was okay.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
    Thanks Bro will get back into this and work on it seems I was messy through here.
reply by c_lucas on 08-Oct-2015
    You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
    The Guest house was run by the Temperance Union it was for men and women ok. I had to read your comment a couple of times, hehe. The chapter has been fixed now as I said above.
Comment from royowen
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I used to be a friend of an interstate driver, who took frequent interstate trips and I travelled with him. The first concert I did with my gospel group, was in the Glen Innes Aog, they gave the whole Sunday night offering to us. Of course when I was young, we made several trips to Sydney via Hay, Balranald, and back to Adelaide again. We've been to Perth and seen the fabulous Kings park, well written my bro, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
    Thanks Bro I just remembered a bit I left out of something my brother said. Will put it in and let you know when it is. You will get a laugh.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
    Hey Bro just added that bit extra to this chapter. You won't have to look all that far down to see the changes. Thanks again.
reply by royowen on 08-Oct-2015
    My pleasure Geoff
reply by royowen on 08-Oct-2015
    My pleasure
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, sankey, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where we learn about your trips with your brother as he made his deliveries. I enjoyed reading it

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
    Thanks Sis. Just getting back into it. Hope you like the added pictures. have been en courage to do more dialogue but in an autobiography as someone pointed out pretty hard to accurately remember actual conversations. Another inserted Chapter went up today and I did another inserted chapter a few weeks ago. Still more work nowhere near the big complete cook review I thought I was. Thanks again, God Bless.