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Comment from OLA THOMAS
A finely done story for children that incorporates good details. I love the simple language and simple clean dialogue lines. I love your appreciative author's notes too. Well done.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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A finely done story for children that incorporates good details. I love the simple language and simple clean dialogue lines. I love your appreciative author's notes too. Well done.
ola thomas
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thanks and read tomorrow!
Ricky...
Comment from Tessa Kay
Hm. there are so many ways this could be understood. Is it talking about your birth? Or some other traumatic experience? Was looking for author's notes for explanation.
Maybe each can put their own meaning to it. :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Hm. there are so many ways this could be understood. Is it talking about your birth? Or some other traumatic experience? Was looking for author's notes for explanation.
Maybe each can put their own meaning to it. :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thanks Tessa,
"I just ended Part One with characters and they are Polar Bears!"
Ricky 1024.