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Comment from Joyce Long
Really cute with Elmo and characters. I get lost with the "Stranger." "Can I help you?" "Stranger." Is this the same character speaking with a whole different line? "Ten is a typo. "Almost is a typo. The same thing happens with the last stanza with "Elmo asks.
The action happens quickly in conversation with stanza four. Do we have any hint that I missed about the stranger wanting to take Elmo to the dark side or what the dark side is. Of course, the readers knows that the dark side represents evil. It should be quite interesting to see what happens to Elmo with "Elmo in the Dark Place."
Cute.
Joyce 9-30-15
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Really cute with Elmo and characters. I get lost with the "Stranger." "Can I help you?" "Stranger." Is this the same character speaking with a whole different line? "Ten is a typo. "Almost is a typo. The same thing happens with the last stanza with "Elmo asks.
The action happens quickly in conversation with stanza four. Do we have any hint that I missed about the stranger wanting to take Elmo to the dark side or what the dark side is. Of course, the readers knows that the dark side represents evil. It should be quite interesting to see what happens to Elmo with "Elmo in the Dark Place."
Cute.
Joyce 9-30-15
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thank you fpr the time and corrections!
Ricky 1024.
Comment from Patricia Dsouza
While I was reading I remembered my childhood! You have taken a lot of troubling writing a lovely piece. All the best for the future
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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While I was reading I remembered my childhood! You have taken a lot of troubling writing a lovely piece. All the best for the future
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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"Thanks and today the first of October is the incredible conclusion
Elmo in the Dar Place".
Thanks,
Ricky...