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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Christine, this is a lovely poem for your granddaughter's 10th birthday - a milestone, double figures. I love the way you have given meaning to each year of her life. Amali - lovely name - HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMALI. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
    Thank you Dorothy for reading and reviewing my poem for Amali who has given us 10 fabulous years she is such a sweet girl ,with a lovely nature ( and she has just begun to write her own poetry ) so my write was an easy one for her. With a bog Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from I am Cat
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Hello Christine,
Yes, double figures... ;)
There are many reasons to celebrate double figures...
At least I thought so when I was young... (the one I didn't like was when I hit double figures in my pants size! LOL Luckily I went back down, but hell... that was a difficult one.) LOL
;)
A beautiful poem and one which she will no doubt treasure forever...
Happy 10th birthday Amali...
(Your'e an awesome Grandmother Christine)
Cat

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much Cat for a truely lovely review and pleased you like it. Amali is very dear to me she is my first granddaughter/child and we are very close. I also have 3 other beautiful grandaughter all special in fact No Two is turning 8 tomorrow so shopping for me today. I will write a double figures one for them all when they turn ten too, but this one was special for my Amali. I hope they think I am awesome too. lol Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem. It is a great presentation. The picture is awesome. The 10 wishes are much better than any other gift or card. She is lucky to have you and may you and she be blessed.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
    Thank You so much jannypan for reading and giving me such a lovely review for my poem . the wishes were from my heart and Amali was thrilled. A sweetie always and I am 😃the lucky one to have her . With Cheers Christine
Comment from Patricia Dsouza
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You write amazingly well and bring out charm through it all. The picture merges well too. I love the choice of picture. I pray your poem is recognized soon.
My favorite lines are:

A dear little girl, grandaughter of ours
We have watched you grow with the years
Pleasures you bring to our lives every day
So it's my turn to send you 10 cheers.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
    Thank you Patricia again for a lovely review and for your wishes for recognition for this too. Amali is a gorgeous grandaughter and she was thrilled with my poem to her. We are very close so the words were very easy to write. Again thank for reading my poems Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A beautiful poem and a beautiful thought to write a poem and frame it for your granddaughter's birthday. I am sure she will cherish it.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Thank you Sandra for your lovely review for my poem and yes I think she was surprised and it does take pride of place. I cherish her too Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Christine

_ What a lovely dedication to Amali---love the name!
_ She's beautiful. Such a great smile.
_ Thanks for sharing you childhood story.
_ Nice job, Grandma.

<<>> Typo??
_Your Pa, he and I (l)ooked down on your face


Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Thank you Jax for your review and rating and lovely comments . yes Amali is such a sweet child ( my first grandchild) time has gone so quickly so I tell her lots of stories and she loved this one so How could I not miss this opportunity lol Cheers Christine😃
Comment from poetadeu
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This is such a sweet, special way to celebrate
your granddaughter's big ten birthday. You
wrote your free style very well and made it
entertaining with your ten cheers for the ten
years you have shared with her in your life.
Congratulations!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much poetadeu for such a lovely review and I am glad you liked this. yes Amali is very sweet and we have fun together.we share lots together. With a big Cheers to you Christine😄
reply by poetadeu on 28-Sep-2015
    That's wonderful...mother and daughter
    is a special connection...Blessings to you both! LOL::}}-Joyce
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    thank you Joyce Cheers 😀
reply by poetadeu on 28-Sep-2015
    Cheers!
reply by Anonymous Member on 01-Oct-2015
    That's wonderful...mother and daughter
    is a special connection...Blessings to you both! LOL::}}-Joyce
reply by Anonymous Member on 02-Oct-2015
    Cheers!
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Hi Chrissy, This is such a lovely poem which, I'm sure, your granddaughter appreciates.

You covered very important aspects of life as you listed them for each of her years. Well done. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Thanks Lou for you time to read my poem and for your review. I enjoyed writing this for her and we have a lovely bond . Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from Nosha17
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What a sweet picture and a sweet girl, Christine. She looks very proud sitting next to her cupcakes in her sweet dress.
Lovely birthday message and lots of love in there, Faye

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Hi Faye Thank you for the inspiration ( with you lovely poem) I thought I would share this. Yes Amali is a sweetie and very special to me ( and she has just started writing poetry so I have been giving her some hints ) Enjoy your review and suppoert Cheers Christine😀
Comment from pharp
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Christine,
The is a very lovely tribute to your beautiful Amali honoring her 10th Birthday. I am sure she was excited and happy to received it from her loving grandmother.
There is a typo in the last line "birthday" and you also left out the word "I" in the second stanza third line. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read. Blessings.................Portia

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
    Thanks you Portia for your kind words and suggestions I will attend to them ASAP . My Amali is a lovely girl and we have a close connection so it has been lovely watching her grow up ( so fast) Glad to have shared this Cheers Christine😀