Knife and fork rebellion.
I guess they need a break.6 total reviews
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi..Neat write...I agree they need a vacation and the perfect remedy would be chop sticks. Eating in smaller bites is healthier too I think. Cheers.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Hi..Neat write...I agree they need a vacation and the perfect remedy would be chop sticks. Eating in smaller bites is healthier too I think. Cheers.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Light322
I liked your poem, its funny but so true. Well use of words and how you played with them to encompass the message and rhyme.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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I liked your poem, its funny but so true. Well use of words and how you played with them to encompass the message and rhyme.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hahaha! This is definitely a non-poetic subject in my books :) I can picture the utensils talking clearly having struggled with my weight. I love the picture of the cutlery wearing a dress. I wonder if that would prevent someone from eating? It's like big brother watching us through the utensils and controlling our eating habits. lol! You sparked my imagination. This is a terrific entry and I wish you well in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Hahaha! This is definitely a non-poetic subject in my books :) I can picture the utensils talking clearly having struggled with my weight. I love the picture of the cutlery wearing a dress. I wonder if that would prevent someone from eating? It's like big brother watching us through the utensils and controlling our eating habits. lol! You sparked my imagination. This is a terrific entry and I wish you well in the voting booth.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the great review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from robyn corum
Cute, cute, cute -- but MEAN! hahahahahaha
I thought this was a clever addition to the contest entries and wish you much luck! I believe this is a great contenda! *smile*
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Cute, cute, cute -- but MEAN! hahahahahaha
I thought this was a clever addition to the contest entries and wish you much luck! I believe this is a great contenda! *smile*
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the great review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from MizKat
Hi,
This is a really cute poem about a knife and fork. Of the poetry from other people that I've rated and reviewed so far I like this one the best.
Don't tell anyone though. I don't want to hurt their feelings.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Hi,
This is a really cute poem about a knife and fork. Of the poetry from other people that I've rated and reviewed so far I like this one the best.
Don't tell anyone though. I don't want to hurt their feelings.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for the encouraging review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from RYME4U
Very clever. I like the subtleness of this poem and the rhyming is smooth and even. You have presented it in a delightful way.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Very clever. I like the subtleness of this poem and the rhyming is smooth and even. You have presented it in a delightful way.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the kind review.