Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "senryu (in my hands)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
23 total reviews
Comment from Chuck23
Creative! I enjoyed this senyru! I was wondering what to expect from the title and didn't see it coming! Well worth a 6-star rating!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015
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Creative! I enjoyed this senyru! I was wondering what to expect from the title and didn't see it coming! Well worth a 6-star rating!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much for the exceptional rating. Glad I caught you off guard. LOL
Comment from Muffins
You are so sly and naughty. This poem is board line adult rated. It takes a lot of creativity and hours to come up with something so brilliant in so few words. It's great to open a writing piece and immediately laugh your you know what off. Girl, please!!!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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You are so sly and naughty. This poem is board line adult rated. It takes a lot of creativity and hours to come up with something so brilliant in so few words. It's great to open a writing piece and immediately laugh your you know what off. Girl, please!!!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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LOL. Yeap, have to avoid the "H" word in talking about this. Thanks ever so much for the six stars, Muffins. It could be naughty or innocent depending on the reader's innocence. :-)
Comment from DALLAS01
OMG. My sides are splitting. What an argument supporting the shear beauty of a double entendre. What can or can't be conveyed in so few syllables is truly amazing. Good luck in the contest. Or was this a contest entry?.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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OMG. My sides are splitting. What an argument supporting the shear beauty of a double entendre. What can or can't be conveyed in so few syllables is truly amazing. Good luck in the contest. Or was this a contest entry?.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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No contest entry. Just inspiration from half-used Kleenex on my desk.
Comment from Zinnia48
I anoint you with a sixer for absolute pure unadulterated cleverness, originality, and creativity! That last line really blindsided me and I guffawed at my desk. thanks for the belly laugh! Caroline
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I anoint you with a sixer for absolute pure unadulterated cleverness, originality, and creativity! That last line really blindsided me and I guffawed at my desk. thanks for the belly laugh! Caroline
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Sorry to be so late to respond to this. I'm still going through Kleenex with allergies. Thanks for the detailed and awesome review. You blew my head off. LOL (no pun intended since you're a female.) Thanks ever so much for the six.
Comment from Domino 2
OK, Shari - my dirty mind literally LOL at the double-meaning punch-line.
The picture could also be taken both ways (excuse the pun), as the lady looks like she's either about to sneeze or have an orgasm. Both at the same time could be messy. ;-)
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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OK, Shari - my dirty mind literally LOL at the double-meaning punch-line.
The picture could also be taken both ways (excuse the pun), as the lady looks like she's either about to sneeze or have an orgasm. Both at the same time could be messy. ;-)
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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LOL She could also have her mouth open ready to suck something.
That would be hilarious to sneeze while doing that. LOL
Comment from I am Cat
Ok, I actually laughed out loud on this one. LOL
Oh how I'd love to give this the six I don't possess :(
damn
I love this one. Well done Shari,
Cat
*still giggling* lol
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Ok, I actually laughed out loud on this one. LOL
Oh how I'd love to give this the six I don't possess :(
damn
I love this one. Well done Shari,
Cat
*still giggling* lol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thanks, Cat. I thank my allergies for inspiration. :-)
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LOL... we do get our inspiration from odd places, don't we? ;)
Comment from Chrissy710
ha ha this is clever and a great image . I like your sense of humour found this amusing , good work and made me smile Cheers Christine. ( sometimes a challenge to come up with something that just clicks bit this did lol)Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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ha ha this is clever and a great image . I like your sense of humour found this amusing , good work and made me smile Cheers Christine. ( sometimes a challenge to come up with something that just clicks bit this did lol)Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Wish I could dream up more like this. Fans love them. :-)
Comment from pickmeplease
Loved it. Laughed out loud with the last line. Would have given you six stars if I had them. Picture pairing was great too.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Loved it. Laughed out loud with the last line. Would have given you six stars if I had them. Picture pairing was great too.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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I appreciate the thought of a six, anyway. They go fast! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Funnnneeeee! LOoks like me, but a younger version. I've gone through a three-pack of Kleenex this month alone with this wretched cold that won't give up. :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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LOL! Funnnneeeee! LOoks like me, but a younger version. I've gone through a three-pack of Kleenex this month alone with this wretched cold that won't give up. :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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I have a box of tissues in every room. My nose get red from so many blow jobs. LOL
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, OMG, I'm rolling on the floor. If I had written this, I would be accused of being a pervert, ha, ha. This was so unexpected, but so funny with it's double meaning. What a clever wit you have, Spitfire. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Ha, ha, OMG, I'm rolling on the floor. If I had written this, I would be accused of being a pervert, ha, ha. This was so unexpected, but so funny with it's double meaning. What a clever wit you have, Spitfire. Good stuff.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thanks, husky. What a great review.