Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like how this is written from Jason's viewpoint. So cold it would freeze a tear is a wonderful line full of meaning and is excellent poetry, it brings up feelings and vivid imagery.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Again...
As i write these words with my Cross pen...
Thanks forever!
Ricky1024.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really enjoyed your poem. I wasn't clear what was happening at first. But figured it out pretty quickly and really enjoyed seeing the world through a newborn. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Thanks Micheal!
Ricky 1024

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

This is a well done chapter. It reads well and flow well with pace. I enjoyed the details in the chapter which is enhanced by the author's notes.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Thanks so much Ola! r
Ricky1024

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Hello Ricky, it has been 8 months i was away, some vacation, other months health problems. Here i am today to read your broken heart, that stops beating whenever you write a poem about your beloved son. I weep with you, i feel your deepest pain, your sufferings have no end, your loneliness strikes your soul through every breath you take. Your writing is so so sad, i pray that some days maybe you can find time to breath. Missing your beloved son, is endless. Bless you Ricky, how i wished you have time to find some peace, but i doubt it. Love again from Montreal. Terry, your friend.
A mother who knows what you are going through. xo
So sorry i have no stars to lighten up your existence. xoox

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

The "View" in co-operation with ABC. studios in New York and my friend Lara S. Moreeti the L.S. W. with "The Gift of Life" in Philadelphia may rock this world on Jay's birthday in November when I promote my "Gift of Life Book" One.
There are over 100 poems in it waiting now for 8 years. I have at least another zillion more! {As you know}
They await my letter.
I have Random House and Penguin interested.
Your thoughts love?
Ricky.. or 24...

Comment from Gone but not forgotten

Excellent

This is very well written despite the devastating circumstances and the tears it drew. My deepest condolences to you and your family. I wish you well. Keep writing!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks for that and good luck here!
Ricky1024.